12月英語四級考前作文預測及范文
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic The Moonlight Clan. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline below: 我要收藏
1)現在很多年輕人每個月都把自己賺的錢花光，他們被稱作月光族
2)有人認為這是一種時尚的消費觀念，但很多人反對這樣消費
3)我對此的看法是
The Moonlight Clan
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行文思路
本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點指出一種現象，提綱第2點針對該現象提出兩種不同的觀點，提綱第3點要求談談我的看法，由此可判斷本文應為對比選擇型作文。
根據所給提綱，本文應包含如下內容：描述月光族現象，引出對這一現象的不同看法;對比闡述兩種看法各自的理由;表明我對月光族的看法并說明理由。
高分范文
The Moonlight Clan
Nowadays, more and more people, especially the young are joining in the army of the moonlight clan. These people exhaust their earnings every month without any savings. Many people think this is a fashionable life style, while more other people object to this kind of consumption style.
Those who support the moonlight clan think that those people know how to enjoy life and have a higher life quality. However, more other people criticize the moonlight clan. They say that the consumption habit of the moonlight clan is unhealthy and sometimes wasteful. In addition, no savings will place the moonlight clan in a difficult position in case of unexpected expenses.
Weighing these two arguments, I prefer to the latter one. In my eyes, though the moonlight clan may acquire temporary satisfaction from their consumption, in the long term, it is unfavorable to their family and career. Just as a proverb says, one should always prepare for a rainy day.
【亮點點評】
尤其，特別。
用于提出兩種對立觀點。
用于引出兩種對立觀點各自的理由。
使處于艱難的境地。
以防，萬一。
用于表明我的傾向。
though引導讓步狀語從句。
從長遠來看。
對不利。
引用諺語結尾，值得借鑒。
佳句臨摩
1.佳句：Many people think this is a fashionable life style, while more other people object to this kind of consumption style.
臨摩：勇敢的人往往會獲得更多的機會，而懦弱的人面對機會也有可能錯過。
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2.佳句：Those who support the moonlight clan think that those people know how to enjoy life and have a higher life quality.
臨摩：持悲觀態度的那些人認為地球上有限的能源很快就會枯竭。
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3.佳句：Just as a proverb says, o
, one should always prepare for a rainy day.
臨摩：正如一句諺語所說的，機會只給那些有準備的人。
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【KEY】
1. Brave people tend to get more opportunities while timid ones may miss them when chances come.
2. Those who hold pessimistic attitudes think that limited energy on earth will be exhausted soon.
3. Just as a proverb says, Opportunities are only for the prepared minds.
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic The Moonlight Clan. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline below: 我要收藏
1)現在很多年輕人每個月都把自己賺的錢花光，他們被稱作月光族
2)有人認為這是一種時尚的消費觀念，但很多人反對這樣消費
3)我對此的看法是
The Moonlight Clan
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
行文思路
本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點指出一種現象，提綱第2點針對該現象提出兩種不同的觀點，提綱第3點要求談談我的看法，由此可判斷本文應為對比選擇型作文。
根據所給提綱，本文應包含如下內容：描述月光族現象，引出對這一現象的不同看法;對比闡述兩種看法各自的理由;表明我對月光族的看法并說明理由。
高分范文
The Moonlight Clan
Nowadays, more and more people, especially the young are joining in the army of the moonlight clan. These people exhaust their earnings every month without any savings. Many people think this is a fashionable life style, while more other people object to this kind of consumption style.
Those who support the moonlight clan think that those people know how to enjoy life and have a higher life quality. However, more other people criticize the moonlight clan. They say that the consumption habit of the moonlight clan is unhealthy and sometimes wasteful. In addition, no savings will place the moonlight clan in a difficult position in case of unexpected expenses.
Weighing these two arguments, I prefer to the latter one. In my eyes, though the moonlight clan may acquire temporary satisfaction from their consumption, in the long term, it is unfavorable to their family and career. Just as a proverb says, one should always prepare for a rainy day.
【亮點點評】
尤其，特別。
用于提出兩種對立觀點。
用于引出兩種對立觀點各自的理由。
使處于艱難的境地。
以防，萬一。
用于表明我的傾向。
though引導讓步狀語從句。
從長遠來看。
對不利。
引用諺語結尾，值得借鑒。
佳句臨摩
1.佳句：Many people think this is a fashionable life style, while more other people object to this kind of consumption style.
臨摩：勇敢的人往往會獲得更多的機會，而懦弱的人面對機會也有可能錯過。
___________________________________________________________________________.
2.佳句：Those who support the moonlight clan think that those people know how to enjoy life and have a higher life quality.
臨摩：持悲觀態度的那些人認為地球上有限的能源很快就會枯竭。
___________________________________________________________________________.
3.佳句：Just as a proverb says, o
, one should always prepare for a rainy day.
臨摩：正如一句諺語所說的，機會只給那些有準備的人。
___________________________________________________________________________.
【KEY】
1. Brave people tend to get more opportunities while timid ones may miss them when chances come.
2. Those who hold pessimistic attitudes think that limited energy on earth will be exhausted soon.
3. Just as a proverb says, Opportunities are only for the prepared minds.
