考研英語復習資料考研英語作文范文的批改48

　　I am a college student who wishes to apply for your recently advertised position for a staff member.

　　Finally, I would be grateful if you would be kind enough to grant me an interview as soon as possible. At that time I could introduce myself in further details. I look forward to your reply.

　　Yours sincerely，

　　Li Ming

　　考研英語作文批改點評如下：

　　Dear Sir or Madam, I am a college student who wishes to apply for your recently advertised position for a staff member. I am sure that I am qualified for it. First, I once worked as a librarian in my college library. I have absoluted(拼寫錯誤) much work experience from it. Second, not only do(這里應該用does) my experience make me a perfect candidate for it, my kindful(拼寫錯誤) and friendly personality is well suited for the job. Third, my hobby is singing.(與申請工作沒有關(guān)系) Finally, I would be grateful if you would be kind enough to grant me an interview as soon as possible. At that time I could introduce myself in further details. I look forward to your reply. Yours sincerely， Li Ming 點評：5-6分第一段寫明你要申請的職位。然后分幾條說明自己。要寫對你申請工作最有幫助的幾條內(nèi)容。