2024高考英語書面表達一輪訓練（6）附參考范文
2024高考英語書面表達一輪訓練（6）附參考范文
良好的人際關系是構建和諧社會的關鍵。假設你是李華，最近你校組織學生圍繞“中學生如何交友？”這一話題展開討論。請根據下表的提示，為某英語報的“Voice Your Opinions”欄目寫一篇稿件，反映你們討論的情況，并談談你對如何交友的看法。
為何交友 建立良好的人際關系，構建和諧社會
交友對象 學習上 互相學習，共同進步
生活上 互相幫助，擺脫煩惱
情感上 互相交流，同甘共苦
如何交友 （提出你的建議）
注意：1．對所給要點逐一陳述，適當發揮，不要簡單翻譯；
2．詞數120左右，開頭已經寫好，不計入總詞數；
3．參考詞匯：和諧的harmonious
Recently we students had a heated discussion on how to make friends.__________________ ______________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
3. 參考范文：
Recently_we_students_had_a_heated_discussion_on_how_to_make_friends.As well all know，good relationship plays an important role in building a harmonious society.
Many of us think we should make friends with those who can help us with our studies so that we can learn from each other and make greater progress.Others believe they should have friends who can help them deal with some problems in life.Still others hold that they should have friends who are willing to listen to them and share their joys and sorrows.
In my opinion，to make friends，we should be friendly and helpful to others.Besides，we should learn to care about others and listen to them patiently.In brief，true friends are like sunshine that brightens our life.
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一, 高考英語書面表達基本策略:
如果是看圖寫文，看懂每幅圖之間的聯系至關重要。
10句話，120個詞左右。
查錯漏。完稿后，檢查一下有沒有時態，語態，拼寫錯誤并逐一加以改正。 卷面整潔。卷面整潔干凈甚至比準確，通順，簡介更重要。因為整潔干凈給閱卷人精神上帶來愉悅，相對而言，分數自然要給得高一些。
為了幫助同學們在平時寫作練習的時候時刻牢記這些寫作的基本要領，特編順口溜如下：細審題，巧構思，列要點，防遺漏。寫日記，同漢語；書信，通知格式要牢記。看清圖表細梳理，寫人記事按順序；完稿后查遺漏，整潔干凈莫忘記。
二, 高考英語書面表達高分策略：從遣詞，造句，謀篇三個方面分析。
, 如果僅僅記住幾個簡單基礎的詞匯,而且一味的重復低水平的英語知識點,還遠遠沒有達到大學的入學要求。這就要求考生在平時的訓練和考試當中，有意識的強化“復雜，高級”這兩個概念，使自己的作文能力區別于普通學生的作文，使自己一下子就站在一個比別人高的位置上，充分顯示自己的實力。
表達人物愛憎感情： like, love, be interested in, be fond of… hate, dislike, be tired of, lose interest in… happy, excited, pleased, satisfied, angry, sad, worried, disappointed, terrified, mad, frightened…
介紹人物的影響及人們對人的評價： He became famous for his new theory. The people had come to love him as an inspiring leader. We regard Li Fei as our model. Lei Feng has been praised for his communist spirit. People spoke highly of him and all respected him.
常見描述人物性格，外貌和身體狀況等的詞語 good-looking /funny-looking /strong-looking /ugly-looking /dirty-looking /ordinary-looking /blue-eyed /white-eyed /warm-hearted /light-hearted /kind-hearted /absent-minded /tall /short /beautiful /pretty /lovely /naughty/ be blind /lame in /be in good or poor condition/ healthy/ fine/ well /strong-tempered /bad-tempered /near-sighted /far-sighted /foolish /stupid /silly /clever /smart /wise /bright / diligent /intelligent /lazy /hard working, etc.
造句的原則：句式多變，語法活用，句子是表達一個完整意思的最小當位，所以造句能力在英文寫作中是非常重要的。好的英語句子能夠生動，形象，準確的表達內容。所以要想寫出漂亮的書面表達，必須從寫好句子開始。
英語基本句型及造句:
主語+謂語+狀語(介詞,名詞短語或從句) The sun rises up in the east and sets in the west. We get up early every morning. The meeting lasted 2 hours.
+不及物動詞+副詞 This kind of wine drinks well and sells well. The suit wears well. Glass breaks easily.
+謂語+介詞+賓語 We all agreed on the terms. He hates to argue with his wife about such small matters. All these things are to be answered for.
+系動詞+形容詞 Good medicine tastes bitter to the mouth. He was so tired that he fell asleep the moment he went to bed. Your explanation sounds reasonable.
+謂語+直接賓語 I want your promise. Have your fixed my watch? This factory produces 1000 cars a week.
+謂語+間接賓語+直接賓語 He paid me a visit yesterday. He owed me 50 yuan. He wrote his family a letter yesterday.
+謂語+賓語+賓補 (to do) I will get someone to repair the recorder for you. I didn’t mean to hurt you. He invited me to teach at a well-known university.
+謂語+賓語+賓補 (do) I often hear her sing the song. The boss made workers work 15 hours a day. Don’t forget to have him come.
+謂語+現在分詞 I heard her singing in the next room. We could feel our heats beating fast. Did you observe the birds flying around the trees?
+謂語+過去分詞 I must have my watch repaired. We must get he task finished on time. Speak louder to make yourself understood by everybody.
+謂語+賓語(動名詞) I suggested putting off the meeting. They all avoided mentioning the matter. We can’t help laughing at the news.
+謂語+賓語(不定式) I can’t afford to buy such a large house. Don’t pretend to know what you don’t. He feared to speak in her presence. +謂語+賓語(名詞/代詞)+介詞+賓語 Nothing can prevent us from going forward. Thank you for your help. He demanded an answer from me.
It was early in the morning. Mr. Smith was in his garden. He was watering flowers. Early in the morning, Mr. Smith was watering flowers in his garden.
A girl was crossing a road. The girl was pretty. The road was wide. A pretty girl was crossing a wide road.
寫好句子的方法二：改寫句子 1) Mr. Green is a tall man, who wears a pair of thick glasses. (改成介詞短語做伴隨狀語) 1) The book cost me 300 yuan. Mr. Green is a tall man with a pair of thick glasses.
2) The ice on the lake is too thin for us to skate on. (使用so…that…結構改寫句子) The ice on the lake is so thin that we can’t skate on it.
練習方法三：一句多譯 這本書花了我300元。 I spent 300 yuan on the book. I paid 300 yuan for the book. The price of the book is 300 yuan. It cost me 300 yuan to buy the book. I don’t know any English, nor does Li Ming. I hardly know any English, nor does Li Ming. I hardly know any English, neither does Li Ming. I hardly know any English, no more does Li Ming. I hardly know any English, so it is with Li Ming. I know no more English than Li Ming does. I know as little English as Li Ming does.
一到家，我就把所見到的一切都記了下來。 On/Upon arriving home, I wrote down everything I had seen. As soon as I arrived home, I wrote down everything I had seen. The moment I arrived home, I wrote down everything I had seen. The instant I arrived home, I wrote down everything I had seen. No sooner had I arrived home than I wrote down everything I had seen.
昨天下午他才來。 He came here yesterday afternoon. He didn’t come here until yesterday afternoon. Not until yesterday afternoon did he come here. It was yesterday afternoon that he arrived here. It was not until yesterday afternoon that he came here.
謀篇的原則：
滿分作文都有個共性就是有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結構緊湊。文章的連貫性和緊湊感是很重要的。句子作為最小的表達意思的語言當位如果只是被隨意的整合，是無法達到有效表達的目的。
常見的句子之間的連接手段有： 使用代詞指代上一句中的名詞 重復使用上一句中的詞 使用連接詞 使用平行結構 高考大綱中常用的連接詞:
表并列補充關系的: what is more, besides, also, as well, moreover, furthermore, in addition, 表轉折對比關系的: but, however, yet, instead, on the other hand, on the contrary, although, different from, in contrast to, despite, in spite of, whereas, unlike, nevertheless, not only…but also, here…there, years ago…today, this…that, the former…the latter, then…now, the first…whereas the second, once…now, on the one hand…on the other hand, some…others, 表因果關系的: since, as, because (of), for, so, thus, therefore, as a result, so that, 表條件關系的: if, on the condition (that), as long as, unless, or else, 表時間關系的: when, after, before, until, as soon as, later, afterwards, soon, lately, recently, since, from then on, eventually, in the meantime, then, suddenly, at the same time, next, early this morning/year/century, after an interval, now, after, presently, later, afterward, somewhat later, finally, at last, all of a sudden, 表特定的順序關系: above all, first of all, firstly, first, secondly, the , next, finally, in the end, at last, 表換一種方式表達: in other words, that is to say, to put it another way, 表進行舉例說明: for instance, for example, like, such as, 表陳述事實: in fact, actually, as a matter of fact, to tell you the truth 表總結: on the whole, in short, all in all, general, in a word, in conclusion, in closing, in summary.
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作文（***）
下圖是你在從部隊回家探親路上發生的一個故事，時間為3月20日，星期三，天氣陰。請用英語以日記的形式敘述一下此故事。
字數：100～120之間。
_______________________________ _______________________________ _______________________________ _______________________________ _________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
參考范文
March 20, Wednesday
Cloudy
I joined the Army two years ago. This was the first time l went home to see my parents. I was very glad. When I walked by the side of a river, I heard someone shouting
Help. Help!"
I saw three children struggling in the river. I jumped into the ice water without hesitation. I tried my best to pull two of them onto the bank. but the third was washed away. So I had
to swim hack to save him. In the end I pulled the last one onto the hank. They were thankful to me and called me hero.
But I think I just did what I should do.
*******************************************************結束
根據下面的圖用英語寫一個題為"Such a Help"的小故事。故事須包含所有圖畫內容。可以適當增加細節，使故事連貫。
詞數：100—120個。
提示：圖中的小孩名叫Tom，老人叫MrSmith．
參考范文
Such a Help
One day Tom was kicking a ball under some trees.
He once kicked it so hard that it got stuck between two branches of a tree. He was too short to reach the ball. Just as he was won- dering how he could get it down, a man was passing by with an
umbrella in his hand. Tom went up and asked for help. Theman threw his umbrella at the ball and it was knocked down.
But unfortunately, the umbrella was caught on the tree. Tom
was happy to have his ball back and went away with it. He did
not even say a word to the man. How could the poor man get his umbrella back? No one knows.
****************.(典型題)*******************結束
2024高考英語書面表達一輪訓練（6）附參考范文
良好的人際關系是構建和諧社會的關鍵。假設你是李華，最近你校組織學生圍繞“中學生如何交友？”這一話題展開討論。請根據下表的提示，為某英語報的“Voice Your Opinions”欄目寫一篇稿件，反映你們討論的情況，并談談你對如何交友的看法。
為何交友 建立良好的人際關系，構建和諧社會
交友對象 學習上 互相學習，共同進步
生活上 互相幫助，擺脫煩惱
情感上 互相交流，同甘共苦
如何交友 （提出你的建議）
注意：1．對所給要點逐一陳述，適當發揮，不要簡單翻譯；
2．詞數120左右，開頭已經寫好，不計入總詞數；
3．參考詞匯：和諧的harmonious
Recently we students had a heated discussion on how to make friends.__________________ ______________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
3. 參考范文：
Recently_we_students_had_a_heated_discussion_on_how_to_make_friends.As well all know，good relationship plays an important role in building a harmonious society.
Many of us think we should make friends with those who can help us with our studies so that we can learn from each other and make greater progress.Others believe they should have friends who can help them deal with some problems in life.Still others hold that they should have friends who are willing to listen to them and share their joys and sorrows.
In my opinion，to make friends，we should be friendly and helpful to others.Besides，we should learn to care about others and listen to them patiently.In brief，true friends are like sunshine that brightens our life.
***********************************************************結束
一, 高考英語書面表達基本策略:
如果是看圖寫文，看懂每幅圖之間的聯系至關重要。
10句話，120個詞左右。
查錯漏。完稿后，檢查一下有沒有時態，語態，拼寫錯誤并逐一加以改正。 卷面整潔。卷面整潔干凈甚至比準確，通順，簡介更重要。因為整潔干凈給閱卷人精神上帶來愉悅，相對而言，分數自然要給得高一些。
為了幫助同學們在平時寫作練習的時候時刻牢記這些寫作的基本要領，特編順口溜如下：細審題，巧構思，列要點，防遺漏。寫日記，同漢語；書信，通知格式要牢記。看清圖表細梳理，寫人記事按順序；完稿后查遺漏，整潔干凈莫忘記。
二, 高考英語書面表達高分策略：從遣詞，造句，謀篇三個方面分析。
, 如果僅僅記住幾個簡單基礎的詞匯,而且一味的重復低水平的英語知識點,還遠遠沒有達到大學的入學要求。這就要求考生在平時的訓練和考試當中，有意識的強化“復雜，高級”這兩個概念，使自己的作文能力區別于普通學生的作文，使自己一下子就站在一個比別人高的位置上，充分顯示自己的實力。
表達人物愛憎感情： like, love, be interested in, be fond of… hate, dislike, be tired of, lose interest in… happy, excited, pleased, satisfied, angry, sad, worried, disappointed, terrified, mad, frightened…
介紹人物的影響及人們對人的評價： He became famous for his new theory. The people had come to love him as an inspiring leader. We regard Li Fei as our model. Lei Feng has been praised for his communist spirit. People spoke highly of him and all respected him.
常見描述人物性格，外貌和身體狀況等的詞語 good-looking /funny-looking /strong-looking /ugly-looking /dirty-looking /ordinary-looking /blue-eyed /white-eyed /warm-hearted /light-hearted /kind-hearted /absent-minded /tall /short /beautiful /pretty /lovely /naughty/ be blind /lame in /be in good or poor condition/ healthy/ fine/ well /strong-tempered /bad-tempered /near-sighted /far-sighted /foolish /stupid /silly /clever /smart /wise /bright / diligent /intelligent /lazy /hard working, etc.
造句的原則：句式多變，語法活用，句子是表達一個完整意思的最小當位，所以造句能力在英文寫作中是非常重要的。好的英語句子能夠生動，形象，準確的表達內容。所以要想寫出漂亮的書面表達，必須從寫好句子開始。
英語基本句型及造句:
主語+謂語+狀語(介詞,名詞短語或從句) The sun rises up in the east and sets in the west. We get up early every morning. The meeting lasted 2 hours.
+不及物動詞+副詞 This kind of wine drinks well and sells well. The suit wears well. Glass breaks easily.
+謂語+介詞+賓語 We all agreed on the terms. He hates to argue with his wife about such small matters. All these things are to be answered for.
+系動詞+形容詞 Good medicine tastes bitter to the mouth. He was so tired that he fell asleep the moment he went to bed. Your explanation sounds reasonable.
+謂語+直接賓語 I want your promise. Have your fixed my watch? This factory produces 1000 cars a week.
+謂語+間接賓語+直接賓語 He paid me a visit yesterday. He owed me 50 yuan. He wrote his family a letter yesterday.
+謂語+賓語+賓補 (to do) I will get someone to repair the recorder for you. I didn’t mean to hurt you. He invited me to teach at a well-known university.
+謂語+賓語+賓補 (do) I often hear her sing the song. The boss made workers work 15 hours a day. Don’t forget to have him come.
+謂語+現在分詞 I heard her singing in the next room. We could feel our heats beating fast. Did you observe the birds flying around the trees?
+謂語+過去分詞 I must have my watch repaired. We must get he task finished on time. Speak louder to make yourself understood by everybody.
+謂語+賓語(動名詞) I suggested putting off the meeting. They all avoided mentioning the matter. We can’t help laughing at the news.
+謂語+賓語(不定式) I can’t afford to buy such a large house. Don’t pretend to know what you don’t. He feared to speak in her presence. +謂語+賓語(名詞/代詞)+介詞+賓語 Nothing can prevent us from going forward. Thank you for your help. He demanded an answer from me.
It was early in the morning. Mr. Smith was in his garden. He was watering flowers. Early in the morning, Mr. Smith was watering flowers in his garden.
A girl was crossing a road. The girl was pretty. The road was wide. A pretty girl was crossing a wide road.
寫好句子的方法二：改寫句子 1) Mr. Green is a tall man, who wears a pair of thick glasses. (改成介詞短語做伴隨狀語) 1) The book cost me 300 yuan. Mr. Green is a tall man with a pair of thick glasses.
2) The ice on the lake is too thin for us to skate on. (使用so…that…結構改寫句子) The ice on the lake is so thin that we can’t skate on it.
練習方法三：一句多譯 這本書花了我300元。 I spent 300 yuan on the book. I paid 300 yuan for the book. The price of the book is 300 yuan. It cost me 300 yuan to buy the book. I don’t know any English, nor does Li Ming. I hardly know any English, nor does Li Ming. I hardly know any English, neither does Li Ming. I hardly know any English, no more does Li Ming. I hardly know any English, so it is with Li Ming. I know no more English than Li Ming does. I know as little English as Li Ming does.
一到家，我就把所見到的一切都記了下來。 On/Upon arriving home, I wrote down everything I had seen. As soon as I arrived home, I wrote down everything I had seen. The moment I arrived home, I wrote down everything I had seen. The instant I arrived home, I wrote down everything I had seen. No sooner had I arrived home than I wrote down everything I had seen.
昨天下午他才來。 He came here yesterday afternoon. He didn’t come here until yesterday afternoon. Not until yesterday afternoon did he come here. It was yesterday afternoon that he arrived here. It was not until yesterday afternoon that he came here.
謀篇的原則：
滿分作文都有個共性就是有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結構緊湊。文章的連貫性和緊湊感是很重要的。句子作為最小的表達意思的語言當位如果只是被隨意的整合，是無法達到有效表達的目的。
常見的句子之間的連接手段有： 使用代詞指代上一句中的名詞 重復使用上一句中的詞 使用連接詞 使用平行結構 高考大綱中常用的連接詞:
表并列補充關系的: what is more, besides, also, as well, moreover, furthermore, in addition, 表轉折對比關系的: but, however, yet, instead, on the other hand, on the contrary, although, different from, in contrast to, despite, in spite of, whereas, unlike, nevertheless, not only…but also, here…there, years ago…today, this…that, the former…the latter, then…now, the first…whereas the second, once…now, on the one hand…on the other hand, some…others, 表因果關系的: since, as, because (of), for, so, thus, therefore, as a result, so that, 表條件關系的: if, on the condition (that), as long as, unless, or else, 表時間關系的: when, after, before, until, as soon as, later, afterwards, soon, lately, recently, since, from then on, eventually, in the meantime, then, suddenly, at the same time, next, early this morning/year/century, after an interval, now, after, presently, later, afterward, somewhat later, finally, at last, all of a sudden, 表特定的順序關系: above all, first of all, firstly, first, secondly, the , next, finally, in the end, at last, 表換一種方式表達: in other words, that is to say, to put it another way, 表進行舉例說明: for instance, for example, like, such as, 表陳述事實: in fact, actually, as a matter of fact, to tell you the truth 表總結: on the whole, in short, all in all, general, in a word, in conclusion, in closing, in summary.
***********************************************************結束
作文（***）
下圖是你在從部隊回家探親路上發生的一個故事，時間為3月20日，星期三，天氣陰。請用英語以日記的形式敘述一下此故事。
字數：100～120之間。
_______________________________ _______________________________ _______________________________ _______________________________ _________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
參考范文
March 20, Wednesday
Cloudy
I joined the Army two years ago. This was the first time l went home to see my parents. I was very glad. When I walked by the side of a river, I heard someone shouting
Help. Help!"
I saw three children struggling in the river. I jumped into the ice water without hesitation. I tried my best to pull two of them onto the bank. but the third was washed away. So I had
to swim hack to save him. In the end I pulled the last one onto the hank. They were thankful to me and called me hero.
But I think I just did what I should do.
*******************************************************結束
根據下面的圖用英語寫一個題為"Such a Help"的小故事。故事須包含所有圖畫內容。可以適當增加細節，使故事連貫。
詞數：100—120個。
提示：圖中的小孩名叫Tom，老人叫MrSmith．
參考范文
Such a Help
One day Tom was kicking a ball under some trees.
He once kicked it so hard that it got stuck between two branches of a tree. He was too short to reach the ball. Just as he was won- dering how he could get it down, a man was passing by with an
umbrella in his hand. Tom went up and asked for help. Theman threw his umbrella at the ball and it was knocked down.
But unfortunately, the umbrella was caught on the tree. Tom
was happy to have his ball back and went away with it. He did
not even say a word to the man. How could the poor man get his umbrella back? No one knows.
****************.(典型題)*******************結束
