揭陽市2024高考英語短文改錯、書面表達一輪訓練（3）附參考范文

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　　短文改錯---- (2010·河北部分重點聯考)

　　Dear Anish，

　　Here are the information about Manchester University.1.________

　　It is about 200 miles far away from London, and it 2.________

　　has a very big schoolyard. You can live in the school3.________

　　or near the school. They have all sorts of course.4.________

　　I'm sure you will find one you like it. I know you5.________

　　are particular interested in human rights. So I will 6.________

　　see that there is anything on their website(網址).7.________

　　I'll send my friend Charlie meet you at the airport8.________

　　when you arrived. You met him a few years ago, but he 9.________

　　has changed a lot since then. Both your aunt or I look10.________

　　forward to seeing you again.

　　See you soon.

　　Peter

　　答案與解析：

　　1．are→is　information是不可數名詞，謂語動詞應使用單數形式。

　　2．去掉far　far通常不與表示具體距離的數詞連用。

　　3．√

　　4．course→courses　根據句中的all sorts of可知，這里要表示的是各種各樣的課程，因此應用復數形式。

　　5．去掉it　“(that) you like”是定語從句，修飾先行詞one。在從句中，關系代詞that作like的賓語，所以it多余。

　　6．particular→particularly　interested是形容詞，應使用副詞修飾。

　　7．that→if/whether　根據上一句中的內容可知這里的意思是看網絡上“是否”有相關信息。

　　8．meet前加to　此處是不定式表示目的。

　　9．arrived→arrive　如果主句是一般將來時，時間狀語從句通常用一般現在時。

　　10．or→and　此處是“both...and...”結構，表示“兩者都”。“Have you taken medicine ?”

　　解析：根據句意，是媽媽問：故為主動語態。

　　短文改錯--------------缺詞

　　缺詞一般為：冠詞/連詞/介詞/系詞be 助詞/

　　【1】缺介詞

　　*He was looking for a glass ^the cupboard (in)

　　解析：根據句意，in the cupboard 做狀語。

　　【2】缺冠詞

　　*However, the popular teacher is at^ same time the one who should be strict with students.(the)

　　解析：形容詞same 和the 搭配使用,故給same前加 the。

　　【3】缺連接詞

　　*In one class, I learned^ it rained

　　(why)

　　解析：根據句子意思可知，缺連接詞，句意為：“在一節課上，我知道了下雨的原因”。

　　【4】缺系詞

　　*What ^your favorite sport ?

　　(is)

　　解析：句子中缺系詞，在What加is.

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　　高考英語書面表達講義：要點作文

　　(3)(25 min.)

　　(2024·益陽一中月考)假如你是李明，你同學李華來信說自己每次遇到重要考試，都會出現一些焦慮癥狀。請你用英語寫一封回信，信的內容應包括下列要點：

　　焦慮癥狀：頭暈、乏力、睡眠不好、食欲不振等

　　建議：

　　1. 考前制定好合適的復習計劃；

　　2. 考試期間正常作息；

　　3. 睡前洗熱水澡、喝熱牛奶等有助于睡眠；

　　4. 其他建議(內容由考生自己擬定)。

　　注意：

　　1. 根據以上內容寫一篇短文，不要逐句翻譯，可適當增加細節以使行文連貫。

　　2. 要準確使用語法和詞匯；使用一定的句型、詞匯，清楚、連貫地表達自己的意思；

　　3. 詞數：不少于120。

　　參考詞匯：頭暈—dizzy(adj.)

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　【參考范文】One possible version：

　　Dear Li Hua,

　　Thanks for your letter. I am writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams.

　　Most of us feel nervous whenever we're taking an important exam. Some will feel dizzy or tired, some will suffer from lack of sleep, and others will lose their appetite. In fact, all these symptoms have terrible effects on our exams and we are all eager to get rid of them.

　　First of all, in my opinion, it's important for us to have a fight attitude towards exams. They are only a means of checking how we are getting along with our studies, so there is no need to worry too much about the results. Study hard every day and make careful plans for every exam. In this way we can avoid suffering from the pressure of exams.

　　Besides, enough sleep can make us energetic and enable us to perform well in an exam. Therefore, during the period of exams, we should not stay up too late. We can also try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed, which might help us to have a sound sleep.

　　We'd better go out for a walk or do some outdoor exercises before an exam so that we can keep ourselves relaxed and then concentrate ourselves on exams.

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　　第***套

　　第一節：短文改錯(共10小題假如英語課上老師要求同學們交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的作文。文中共有十處語言錯誤，要求你在錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個詞。

　　增加：在缺詞處加上一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫上該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。

　　注意：1.每處錯誤及修改均僅限一詞；

　　2.只允許修改十處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

　　I saw an accident happened on my way to home this afternoon. A girl was crossing the street on a zebra crossing while a young man drove a motorbike towards her. The young man saw the girl but tried to stop, but he drove too fast to stop. He hit the girl and fell off her motorbike. The girl was bad hurt and couldn’t move. The young man didn’t know how to do. I ran to a phone box nearby and dialed 110. Soon the police arrived. They send her to the nearest hospital at once. One of the policeman talked to the young man and wrote something down while was talking. I think it is very dangerous to drive very fast.

　　參考答案、、短文改錯(共10小題)I saw an accident happened on my way to home this afternoon. A girl was crossing the street on a zebra

　　happen

　　去掉to

　　crossing while a young man drove a motorbike towards her. The young man saw the girl but tried to stop,

　　when

　　and

　　but he drove too fast to stop. He hit the girl and fell off her motorbike. The girl was bad hurt and couldn’t

　　his

　　badly

　　move. The young man didn’t know how to do. I ran to a phone box nearby and dialed 110. Soon the police

　　what

　　arrived. They send her to the nearest hospital at once. One of the policeman talked to the young man and

　　sent

　　policemen

　　wrote something down while was talking. I think it is very dangerous to drive very fast.

　　加he或去掉was

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　　（2）

　　最近，你班試行在課間播放音樂，同學們對此私下議論，看法不一。請你根據下表的信息，給你班的班主任Mr Edward 寫一封信，客觀地介紹大家的看法。

　　部分同學認為?

　　1.播放音樂能活躍氣氛? 1.課間時間太短，播放音樂達不到預期效果??

　　2.能使大腦得到放松，減輕學習的疲勞? 2.課間需要的是安靜，而不是嘈雜的聲音?

　　3.它能給大家帶來歡樂和美的享受? 3.有時上課后還沉浸在課間的音樂中?

　　One possible version:

　　Dear Mr Edward,

　　Recently we have carried out the practice to play music during the class break, and the students have had many private talks about it. Their opinions mainly fall into two groups. Most of us agree that music should be played. As we know, music can produce a lively and happy atmosphere. Besides, music brings us relaxation after hard study, which reduces the tiredness. Listening to music also makes us feel happy and nice. On the other hand, some students don't think so. In their opinion, they can't get the expected result by playing music, as the break between classes is too short. What is needed during the break is peace instead of noise produced by the music. In addition, in class some students are still lost in the music they have heard during the break.

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　　高考英語作文（經典好句）

　　（三）結尾句

　　1.The most effective means to solve this problem is that ______________. In that case, ______________.

　　解決這個問題的最有效的方法是……。如果那樣的話……

　　2. Everything has its own two sides, no exception with AAA. For one thing, ______________. For another, ______________.

　　任何事情都有它的兩個方面，AAA也不除外，一方面……另一方面……

　　3. My experience tells me that to ______________ need a thorough and persevering process, and in this process you had better abide by the principles mentioned above.

　　我的經驗告訴我……需要一個細心而又堅持不懈的過程，并且在這個過程中你最好遵守這其中涉及的規則。

　　4. On the whole, it is high time that we recognized the significance of ______________.

　　總體上來說，這是我們認識到……的重要性的緊急時刻了。

　　5. As a result, we should take some effective methods to ______________.

　　因此，我們應該對……采取許多有效的措施

　　6. Judging by the figures, we can draw a conclusion that ______________.

　　通過分析這些數據，我們可以得到那樣一個……的結論

　　7. In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ______________. Only in this way can ______________ in the future.

　　一句話來說，整個社會應當對……的問題給予密切的關注。只有以這種方式才能在將來……

　　8. In my opinion, we should place much emphasis on the importance of ______________.

　　以我的觀點來看，我們應當對……的重要性給予重視

　　9. But ______________ and ______________ have their own advantages. For example, ______________, while ______________. Comparing those two, however, I prefer to ______________.

　　但是……和……具有它們自己的優勢。舉個例子，然而。對比這兩者，我更喜歡……

　　10. In my opinion, ______________ is just as common as ______________. If ______________, it may be very useful. Whatever ______________, the key point (of……) lies in ______________.

　　以我的觀點來看，……就像……如果，它將非常有效。無論……重點在于……

　　11. Are their opinions correct? To my mind, the first idea seems ______________. As for the second idea, ______________.

　　他們的觀點正確嗎？我認為，第一個觀點看起來……。對于第二個觀點，……

　　12. As a popular saying goes, ______________. In my opinion what really counts is not ______________, but ______________. I believe that as long as ______________, we will ______________. So I am for the opinion that ______________.

　　一個普遍的說法是……。依我來看真正的觀點不是……而是……我相信只要……我們將會……所以我的觀點是……

　　13. In my opinion, both sides are partly right. When we ______________, we should take into consideration all aspects of the problems, and then make the right decision.

　　以我的觀點來看，所有方面都部分正確。當我們……時，我們應當考慮問題的所有方面，并且做出正確的決定。

　　14. Personally, I believe that ______________. Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because ______________.

　　一己之見，我認為……。作為結果，我相信一個光明的未來在等待著我們，因為……

　　15. People are coming to realize the importance of ______________. They have begun to try their best to ______________. We believe that ______________.

　　人們逐漸認識到……的重要性，他們開始付出最大努力來……我們相信……

　　16. All in all, we cannot live without ______________. But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with problems that would arise.

　　總之，我們不可能離開……來生活。但是同時對于即將出現的問題我們必須尋找新的方法來解決。

　　17. With the development of society, ______________. So it’s urgent and necessary to ______________. If every member is willing to contribute himself to the society, it will be better and better.

　　隨著社會的發展，……所以……是急切并且必要的。如果每個人心甘情愿的為社會做出貢獻，這將會好上加好。

　　18. It is difficult to say whether ______________ is good or not ，In general as it depends very much on the situation of ______________. However, from a personal point of view I find ______________.

　　很難說……是好還是壞，一般情況下，它在很大程度上取決于……的情形。然而，從個人觀點來看我發現……

　　19. It is essential that effective actions should be taken to end for the situation.

　　對于這樣的情形將有效的行動堅持到底是必要的。

　　20. It is no doubt that special attention must be paid to the problem of ______________.

　　毋庸置疑的，對于……的問題我們必須給予特別的關注

　　21. But both ______________ and ______________ have disadvantages. For example, ______________. Which to choose, ______________ or ______________? Careful consideration is necessary before you make your own choice.

　　但是……和……都有缺點，舉例說……選擇哪一個？……或什么？在做出自己的決定時細心的考慮是必要的。

　　22. From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that ______________.

　　通過上面的討論，我們將理智的得到……的結論。