2024高考英語(yǔ)二輪書面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練：話題作文（22）

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　　訓(xùn)練（22）及參考范文

　　你校學(xué)生會(huì)需招聘一名留學(xué)生做英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)顧問，請(qǐng)你以短文形式寫一則招聘啟事。內(nèi)容主要包括：

　　——母語(yǔ)是英語(yǔ)，漢語(yǔ)流利者優(yōu)先

　　——解答用語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)問題，協(xié)助組織英語(yǔ)活動(dòng)

　　——每周4小時(shí)，報(bào)酬面議

　　——聯(lián)系人：李華（Tel:13011223344）

　　注意：1。詞數(shù)100左右；

　　2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

　　3.啟事標(biāo)語(yǔ)和結(jié)尾已為你寫好。

　　五、One Possible Version

　　English Advisor Wanted

　　The Student Union of our school decides to invite an international student to work as an English Study Advisor next term. The main responsibilities of the advisor include helping students to practice their oral English. Answering their questions, and helping organize activities such as singing English songs, English evenings, or lectures on interesting topics.

　　The applicant should be a native speaker of English. Fluency in Chinese is preferred. The advisor is expected to work 4 hours per week.

　　If you are interested, please call Li Hua at 13011223344 for an interview. Payment for the service will be discussed during the interview.

　　Student Union

　　【預(yù)測(cè)試題l】向雷鋒學(xué)習(xí)——【看圖寫話】【日記應(yīng)用文】

　　1、為了響應(yīng)毛主席提出的“向雷鋒同志學(xué)習(xí)”的號(hào)召，配合“交通安全”的宣傳活動(dòng)，光明中學(xué)組織子一次到某汽車站的學(xué)雷鋒活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下6幅圖畫，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇日記。

　　記敘類看圖寫話以記敘為主，兼有少量的議論。做此類題的，學(xué)生一定要根據(jù)圖畫，寫出圖畫中活動(dòng)的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、環(huán)境及活動(dòng)內(nèi)容，幾幅圖畫要兼顧，切忌過多描寫或忽視某一圖畫的內(nèi)容，文章結(jié)尾可適當(dāng)扦發(fā)一下自己的情感，以達(dá)到畫龍點(diǎn)睛的效果。

　　1、這是一篇記敘一天活動(dòng)的日記。文章用第一人稱。時(shí)態(tài)主要用過去時(shí)。

　　2、寫作要點(diǎn)：（1）時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、事件：（2）活動(dòng)情況；（3）回家的時(shí)間及活動(dòng)后的感受。

　　March 5. 2024

　　Monday

　　Fine

　　Forty-nine years ago, Chairman Mao called on us to learn from Comrade Lei Feng. To mark the occasion, we organized an activity at a nearby bus station today.

　　At 8 o'clock in the mowing, we arrived at the 712 bus station, where we were warmly welcomed by the drivers and conductors.

　　Then we broke up into several groups. Some of us taught some drivers and conductors English, while others cleaned buses. Still others directed traffic at the crossroads near the bus station and helped the elderly cross the street.

　　Staff members of the bus station and our classmates then took part in a general knowledge quiz on the traffic safety in the fternoon, which was great fun for both sides. Around four o'clock, we said goodbye to one another, and felt very happy on the way home.

　　Today's activity has taught us the new meaning of the spirit of Lei Feng: sharing with others what you have---your time, energy, or knowledge--makes you feel warm in your heart. It makes a difference in how I feel about myself

　　（1）寫作模板

　　首段：概括交代事件發(fā)生的時(shí)間＼地點(diǎn)＼人物等信息；

　　交代時(shí)間常用表達(dá)：One day,…：The other day,…

　　Last week，…At 8 o'clock…

　　交代地點(diǎn)常用表達(dá)：in my office／in…；on the way to…

　　交代時(shí)間地點(diǎn)與相關(guān)人物的句型：sb．was doing sth．when sth．／sb．did sth;

　　時(shí)間＋was memorable because sb. did sth.: This particular day began at ＋時(shí)間點(diǎn)＋in the morning / afternoon / evening in＋地點(diǎn)

　　中心段：交待細(xì)節(jié)，注重解決有關(guān)“how”的問題。交待細(xì)節(jié)時(shí)應(yīng)注意過多不必要的細(xì)節(jié)會(huì)沖淡文章的主題口因此，在細(xì)節(jié)的選擇上應(yīng)注意選擇與主題密切相關(guān)的內(nèi)容，從而深化文章主題。

　　推動(dòng)情節(jié)發(fā)展常用表達(dá)：then, suddenly, immediately, no sooner...than..., hardly/scarcely...when..., while, when, as, not until... 等.

　　結(jié)尾段：介紹故事的結(jié)局或談自己的感想，可適當(dāng)發(fā)表一點(diǎn)議論：

　　表結(jié)局常用表達(dá)：At last / Finally, ...; However, ... Luckily / Fortunately, ... ; To one's surprise, ...

　　表感想常用表達(dá)：Personally, I think that...; I learn from the story that...: I think that this unforgettable and unusual experience will be fresh on my mind forever.