2024屆山東省膠州市高考英語二輪寫作賞析精編（3）

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　　山東省膠州市2024高考英語（二輪）寫作賞析精編（3）及參考范文

　　【浙江省2024模擬沖刺試題】書面表達 (滿分30分)

　　”為題，寫一篇短文介紹你的好朋友王佳。要點如下：

　　1、你的好朋友王佳是英語課代表（English representative），英語成績好, 課堂表現出色。2、她高一時英語演講比賽獲獎，還代表學校參加了在上海舉辦的英語辯論賽（the English Debating Competition），英語交際能力強。3、她生活態度樂觀向上,充滿熱情……

　　注意：1．詞數。2.不可逐條翻譯。English representative in our class. In my mind, she is outstanding in the English class with a great sense of reflection and always willing to share.

　　In Senior One, Wang Jia successfully got the prize at the final English speaking contest. What’s more, she represented the school to attend the English Debating Competition in Shanghai. She is the girl who has great English communicating ability. Besides, she always puts her enthusiasm into her study and homework. She has an optimism attitude to life, and never gives up.

　　I am glad to have such a nice friend and have the opportunity to study together with her. I fully believe Wang Jia has the potential to be successful and I hope our friendship will last forever.

　　【山東省2024仿真模擬沖刺卷】寫作（滿分30分）

　　近年來，隨著私家車的增加，城市交通越來越擁擠。在中、小學生上學或放學時，校門口以及學校附近擁擠問題更加嚴重。這給學生、教師、家長和其他市民帶來許多不便。尤其值得注意的是，學校附近的交通堵塞也存在不可忽略的隱患。為此，這引起了不少民眾的擔憂。你作為一名在校學生，署名張小明，根據以下要點寫一封英語信，向本校英語報投稿。1．為什么要寫這封英語信。

　　2．你們學校門口及附近交通擁擠的原因。

　　3．提出二至三條建議。

　　注意：詞數120左右。

　　Dear Editor,

　　_____________________________________________________________________

　　Yours,

　　Zhang Xiaoming

　　【參考范文】

　　Dear Editor,

　　I’m Zhang Xiaoming, a student from Grade 3．I am writing to discuss the traffic problem near our school gate.

　　With so many parents coming to pick up their children, traffic jams are frequent near the school gate, causing much inconvenience to us students as well as our teachers and passers-by．Many people have been worrying about the hidden traffic problems．So I strongly recommend some effective and urgent measures be taken．First, we should encourage students to ride their bicycles or walk to school by themselves instead of taking cars, which will not only help reduce the jam but benefit students’ health as well．It is also a good idea to allow junior students to leave school 10 minutes earlier than others．Besides, cars should not be allowed to park near the school gate.

　　I do hope my suggestions can be considered and the problem can be solved soon.

　　Yours,

　　Zhang Xiaoming

　　【江西省九江市2024二模】書面表達（滿分25分距離高考剩下不到時間了，緊張的備考已經拉開序幕，但是很多同學還不知如何處理學習、健身休息與高考備考之間的關系。請根據寫一篇英語短文，談一談你對這一問題的建議。注意：

　　1.詞數10字左右，開頭語已為你寫好；

　　可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。How to Get Prepared for the College Entrance Exams

　　The College Entrance Examination is drawing near. _______________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　【參考范文】

　　The College Entrance Examination is drawing near. However, most students of senior three don’t know how to connect rest, doing exercise with study. In their eyes they should sacrifice their rest time in order to get high scores, which results in poor health and low efficiency of learning. (48)

　　Just as a famous saying goes: all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. we should be aware that nothing is more valuable than health which is a foundation of success. Therefore, on the one hand, we should make preparations for the exam fully and systematically. On the other hand, we should relieve stress by means of relaxation and doing sports. (111)

　　In conclusion, only when we have adequate rest and doing some sports can we study more efficiently. (128)

　　2024書面表達訓練

　　隨著人們生活水平的提高，越來越多的家庭擁有了私家車。你們班同學就此現象展開了一次討論，提出兩種不同的觀點和看法。假如你是趙凱，請你根據下表提供的信息，給《學生雙語》報社寫一封信，客觀介紹這兩種看法。

　　贊同者認為反對者認為

　　1. 方便快捷舒適的交通工具；

　　2. 反映出生活水平提高，國家富強；

　　3. 帶動其它行業發展。 1. 廢氣污染嚴重；

　　2. 影響交通，導致更多事故，危及行人安全；

　　3. 停車問題日益突出。

　　注意：1. 信的開頭和結尾已給出。 2. 詞數：120左右。3. 參考詞匯：危及endanger

　　范文：

　　Dear Editor,

　　I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we recently had about whether or not it is good for families to own cars.

　　___________________________________________________________

　　In short, people should think twice before buying a car.

　　Yours

　　Zhao Kai

　　【參考范文】

　　Test 11

　　Dear Sir,

　　My name is Li Hua, from Hope High School in Yinchuan. I’m glad to get the news that Hong Kong University will have independent recruitment in mainland, so I would like to apply for it.

　　I am eighteen, studying in Senior 3. I am sociable, easy－going and good at communicating with others. Besides, I am quite independent and it is easy for me to adapt to a new environment. As a senior student, I have been working hard at my lessons and managed to get high grades. All these will enable me to continue my study in your university. What’s more, my hobbies are playing basketball and football and I am also good at playing the violin.

　　Looking forward to your reply.

　　Yours sincerely，

　　Li Hua

　　廣東省高三考前沖刺卷基礎寫作(共1小題，滿分15分)

　　假設你們學校最近就你們所在的城市是否應該發展旅游業(tourism)作為研究性課程的內容進行課題討論，請你根據下面所給出的要點提示，寫一個在討論會上的英語發言稿(討論會將有外籍教師參加)。

　　寫作內容

　　1．發展旅游業給當地經濟發展和人民生活帶來的好處；

　　2．旅游業過快發展的弊端；

　　3．你的看法。

　　寫作要求

　　1．只能使用5個句子表達全部內容；

　　2．內容可適當發揮，注意行文連貫。

　　評分標準

　　句子結構準確，信息內容完整，語篇連貫。

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　基礎寫作參考范文Tourism can benefit us a great deal.For one thing，it will help the city’s economy and advance the well-being of local people; for another，we will have nice parks，the first-class roads and grand buildings and also we will get lots of chances to communicate with tourists from all over the world.

　　If tourism grows too quickly，people will move from their early jobs to those concerning tourism and local industry will suffer.Too many tourists can crowd public places and cause some pollution.

　　I think it is necessary to develop tourism but first of all we should have a proper plan so that tourism should be developed steadily and efficiently.

　　2024書面表達訓練

　　假如你是李華，你的美國網友Jack目前正在一家孔子學院學習漢語，你們倆約定每周都給對方寫一封信，他用漢語，你用英語，以期相互學習和幫助。最近你收到他發來的一封電子郵件，請你根據下列提示用英語給他寫一封回信：

　　1. 表揚他的進步，并指出來信中的錯誤；

　　2. 給他一些改進的具體建議；

　　3. 你將發給他一篇游記，期待他對你的郵件進行回復。

　　注意：1. 詞數：80-120；

　　2. 可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

　　Dear Jack,

　　I’m just so glad to receive your regular letter. ____________________________________

　　_____________________________________________________________________________

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　【參考范文】

　　Dear Jack,

　　I’m just so glad to receive your regular letter.

　　I’m proud to tell you that you have made rapid progress in such a short time! You letter is better written than the last one. Obviously, you have mastered how to use some Chinese characters freely. But it doesn’t mean there’s no problem at all. For instance, unlike English, we usually use “因為……所以……” in one sentence. So you should correct the fourth sentence in your letter. And I advise you to do more reading and try to use these sentence patterns in your writing as possible as you can.

　　I wrote a travel journal about our trip to a natural park yesterday. I’ll send it to you later. If there is any mistake in my writing, please tell me and correct it for me. I’m sure we both will make great progress this way.

　　I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.

　　山東省膠州市2024高考英語（二輪）寫作賞析精編（3）及參考范文

　　【浙江省2024模擬沖刺試題】書面表達 (滿分30分)

　　”為題，寫一篇短文介紹你的好朋友王佳。要點如下：

　　注意：1．詞數。2.不可逐條翻譯。English representative in our class. In my mind, she is outstanding in the English class with a great sense of reflection and always willing to share.

　　I am glad to have such a nice friend and have the opportunity to study together with her. I fully believe Wang Jia has the potential to be successful and I hope our friendship will last forever.

　　【山東省2024仿真模擬沖刺卷】寫作（滿分30分）

　　2．你們學校門口及附近交通擁擠的原因。

　　3．提出二至三條建議。

　　注意：詞數120左右。

　　Dear Editor,

　　_____________________________________________________________________

　　Yours,

　　Zhang Xiaoming

　　【參考范文】

　　Dear Editor,

　　I’m Zhang Xiaoming, a student from Grade 3．I am writing to discuss the traffic problem near our school gate.

　　I do hope my suggestions can be considered and the problem can be solved soon.

　　Yours,

　　Zhang Xiaoming

　　【江西省九江市2024二?！繒姹磉_（滿分25分距離高考剩下不到時間了，緊張的備考已經拉開序幕，但是很多同學還不知如何處理學習、健身休息與高考備考之間的關系。請根據寫一篇英語短文，談一談你對這一問題的建議。注意：

　　1.詞數10字左右，開頭語已為你寫好；

　　可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。How to Get Prepared for the College Entrance Exams

　　The College Entrance Examination is drawing near. _______________________________

　　【參考范文】

　　In conclusion, only when we have adequate rest and doing some sports can we study more efficiently. (128)

　　2024書面表達訓練

　　贊同者認為反對者認為

　　1. 方便快捷舒適的交通工具；

　　2. 反映出生活水平提高，國家富強；

　　3. 帶動其它行業發展。 1. 廢氣污染嚴重；

　　2. 影響交通，導致更多事故，危及行人安全；

　　3. 停車問題日益突出。

　　注意：1. 信的開頭和結尾已給出。 2. 詞數：120左右。3. 參考詞匯：危及endanger

　　范文：

　　Dear Editor,

　　I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we recently had about whether or not it is good for families to own cars.

　　___________________________________________________________

　　In short, people should think twice before buying a car.

　　Yours

　　Zhao Kai

　　【參考范文】

　　Test 11

　　Dear Sir,

　　My name is Li Hua, from Hope High School in Yinchuan. I’m glad to get the news that Hong Kong University will have independent recruitment in mainland, so I would like to apply for it.

　　Looking forward to your reply.

　　Yours sincerely，

　　Li Hua

　　廣東省高三考前沖刺卷基礎寫作(共1小題，滿分15分)

　　寫作內容

　　1．發展旅游業給當地經濟發展和人民生活帶來的好處；

　　2．旅游業過快發展的弊端；

　　3．你的看法。

　　寫作要求

　　1．只能使用5個句子表達全部內容；

　　2．內容可適當發揮，注意行文連貫。

　　評分標準

　　句子結構準確，信息內容完整，語篇連貫。

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　If tourism grows too quickly，people will move from their early jobs to those concerning tourism and local industry will suffer.Too many tourists can crowd public places and cause some pollution.

　　I think it is necessary to develop tourism but first of all we should have a proper plan so that tourism should be developed steadily and efficiently.

　　2024書面表達訓練

　　1. 表揚他的進步，并指出來信中的錯誤；

　　2. 給他一些改進的具體建議；

　　3. 你將發給他一篇游記，期待他對你的郵件進行回復。

　　注意：1. 詞數：80-120；

　　2. 可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

　　Dear Jack,

　　I’m just so glad to receive your regular letter. ____________________________________

　　_____________________________________________________________________________

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　【參考范文】