2024屆高考英語二輪專題復習提升精選短文改錯12
高考英語二輪專題復習提升精選：短文改錯
1.
假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（^）。并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（/）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不記分。
One rainy day while I was walking home with one of my friend, a truck came to a stop besides us. The driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella because he found we were wet through. I stood there and couldn’t believe in that a complete stranger is so thoughtful. The man insisted, so I grateful accepted the offer, thanked him and watched the truck disappear down the road. This man might need the umbrella himself, and he preferred to give it to everyone else. It was a lesson to us that it was possible give without expect anything in return.
2.短文改錯
Dear Tom,
I know there have trouble for you to communicate with others, and you may often feel lonely．That's why you are new from here and people don't know about you．But I think you can make it if you can follow the advices below．
First, you should take a active part in the discussions and show your own opinions about the matters．At the same time, never fail to listening to other people's views．Second, you should learn your classmates' likes and dislikes．Only in this way can you be able to get to know more different people and show them that you are actually very friendly．Last but not least, I will always be ready to help you．We can take part in some activities together, that I can introduce you to others．
As time going on, people will know you better and be willing to make friends with you．
Best regards．
Peter
3.文中共有10處語言錯誤， 要求你在錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），在其下面寫上該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。
注意：1.
每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從11處起）不記分。
Dear Editor,
Recently we have made a discussion about the prevent of global warming in our research group. Everybody has become aware the green-house effect, what has drawn the attention of the world. Many scientists on the summit of COPENHAGEN warned any rise above 2 degrees could lead to a sea level rise threatening islands and coastal cities, kill off many specie of animals and plants. As a result of, every nation should work together to limit the release of carbon dioxide. Everybody should shoulder the responsible to fight against climate change, and a low carbon life is a must.I think fight against global warming is part of environmental protection. If we humans are more friend to nature, nature will be friendly, too. It’s time everybody rethink our role in keeping peace with our mother, nature.
Yours sincerely,
Lihua
4.
假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
Hi, everyone. To let us get closely to nature and do more exercise, the Committee of our community will organise the activity. All residents they are interested in farming are invited to take part the activity. Weather permitted, we抣l ride bike to do some farming this Saturday o n a farm. It is about 5 kilometres far away from our community. You can grow some vegetables, plant some flowers and fed fish in the lake nearby. You will be trained and guide while farming. Not only will you enjoy the pleasure of labour and get relaxed, but also you can taste some fresh produce unless you are willing to. Everyone is welcome to attend!
5.
此題要求改正所給短文中的錯誤。對標有題號的每一行作出判斷：如無錯誤，則在該行右邊橫線上畫出一個勾（√）；如有錯誤（每行只有一個錯誤），則按下列情況改正：
此行多一個詞：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉，在此行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉；
此行缺一個詞：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（），在此行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞；
該行錯一個詞：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。
注意：原行沒有錯的不要改。
The Grand Canal is the longest canal in the world．It
76．
runs from Beijing to Hangzhou, by a distance of nearly
77．
1,800 kilometres．Most rivers in China run from．western to
78．
east, so the ancient rulers found necessary to dig a canal
79．
that run from the south to the north．In the year 605
AD,
80．
Emperor Yang Guang ordered the canal to be dug．Dig such
81．
a long canal was very difficult．3．6 million of people worked
82．
on them and in less than a year over half of them lost their
83．
lives．Before the construction was completed, the Grand
84．
Canal has been playing an important roles in transport． 85．
6.假定英語課上英語老師要求同桌之間互相修改作文，請你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在該詞下面寫出該加的詞。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1、每處錯誤及修改均僅限一詞。
2、只允許修改10處，多者（從11處起）不計分。
Thanks very much for your story. The plot is very touched. OK, now listen to me carefully. It’s very funny. One day, a young man was going from house to house on his street so he wanted to introduced him to all his new neighbors. Outside one house, he stopped and saw a big dog sitting on the sidewalk. Well, he thought that it was belonged to the people in the house, but he paid no attention to it. He just pressed the bell, and the owners asked him in, and the dog went in, either. He greeted them with a smile and then he sat down, and a couple gave him a cup of coffee and some cookies. Well, the dog ate one of the cookies off the plate, and sat in his knee. The young man don’t want to seem rude, so he petted the dog gentle and continued talking to the couple. Anyway, when it was time to go, he thanked them and left. When the young man left, the woman called after him, “Excuse me, don’t forget to take your dog!”
試卷答案
1.
One rainy day while I was walking home with one of my friend, a truck came to a stop
friends
besides us. The driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella because he found
beside
an
we were wet through. I stood there and couldn’t believe in that a complete stranger is
去掉
was
so thoughtful. The man insisted, so I grateful accepted the offer, thanked him and watched
gratefully
the truck disappear down the road. This man might need the umbrella himself, and he
but
preferred to give it to everyone else. It was a lesson to us that it was possible∧give without
someone
to
expect anything in return.
expecting
2.
Dear Tom,
I know there have trouble for you to communicate with others, and you
is
may often feel lonely. That’s why you are new from here and people don’t know
because
about you. But I think you can make it if you can follow the advices
advice
below.
First, you should take a active part in the discussions and show your own
an
opinions about the matters. At the same time, never fail to listening to other
listen
people’s views. Second, you should learn/ your classmates’ likes and
about
dislikes. Only in this way can you be able to get to know more different people
will
and show them that you are actually very friendly. Last but not least, I will
always be ready to help you. We can take part in some activities together, that I
where
can introduce you to others.
As time going on, people will know you better and be willing to make
With(或者把going改為goes)
friends with you.
Best regards.
Peter
3.1. prevent→prevention
2. aware∧ of
3.what → which
4.kill →killing
5.specie →species
6. result of → result
7. responsible →responsibility
8. fight → fighting
9. friend → friendly
10. rethink → rethought
4.
Hi, everyone. To let us get closely to nature and do more exercise, the
close
Committee of our community will organise the activity. All residents they
an
who/that
are interested in farming are invited to take part∧the activity. Weather
in
permitted, we’ll ride bike to do some farming this Saturday on a farm. It
permitting
bikes
is about 5 kilometres far away from our community. You can grow some
刪除
vegetables, plant some flowers and fed fish in the lake nearby. You will be
feed
trained and guide while farming. Not only will you enjoy the pleasure of
guided
labour and get relaxed, but also you can taste some fresh produce unless
if或將willing改為unwillingyou are willing to. Everyone is welcome to attend!
5.76. √
77. by → with
78. western → west
79. found后加it
80.run → ran
81. Dig → Digging
82.去掉million后面的of
83.第一個them → it
84. Before →Since
85.roles →role
6.
Thanks very much for your story. The plot is very touched. OK, now
1. touching
listen to me carefully. It’s very funny. One day, a young man was going
from house to house on his street so he wanted to introduced him to all
2. because
3.himself
his new neighbors. Outside one house, he stopped and saw a big dog
sitting on the sidewalk. Well, he thought that it was belonged to the
4.去掉was
people in the house, but he paid no attention to it. He just pressed the bell,
5.so
and the owners asked him in, and the dog went in, either. He greeted
6.too
them with a smile and then he sat down, and a couple gave him a cup of
7.the
coffee and some cookies. Well, the dog ate one of the cookies off the
plate, and sat in his knee. The young man don’t want to seem rude, so he
8.on
9.didn’t
petted the dog gentle and continued talking to the couple. Anyway, when
10.gently
it was time to go, he thanked them and left. When the young man left, the woman called after him, “Excuse me, don’t forget to take your dog!”
高考英語二輪專題復習提升精選：短文改錯
1.
假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（^）。并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（/）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不記分。
One rainy day while I was walking home with one of my friend, a truck came to a stop besides us. The driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella because he found we were wet through. I stood there and couldn’t believe in that a complete stranger is so thoughtful. The man insisted, so I grateful accepted the offer, thanked him and watched the truck disappear down the road. This man might need the umbrella himself, and he preferred to give it to everyone else. It was a lesson to us that it was possible give without expect anything in return.
2.短文改錯
Dear Tom,
I know there have trouble for you to communicate with others, and you may often feel lonely．That's why you are new from here and people don't know about you．But I think you can make it if you can follow the advices below．
First, you should take a active part in the discussions and show your own opinions about the matters．At the same time, never fail to listening to other people's views．Second, you should learn your classmates' likes and dislikes．Only in this way can you be able to get to know more different people and show them that you are actually very friendly．Last but not least, I will always be ready to help you．We can take part in some activities together, that I can introduce you to others．
As time going on, people will know you better and be willing to make friends with you．
Best regards．
Peter
3.文中共有10處語言錯誤， 要求你在錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），在其下面寫上該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。
注意：1.
每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從11處起）不記分。
Dear Editor,
Recently we have made a discussion about the prevent of global warming in our research group. Everybody has become aware the green-house effect, what has drawn the attention of the world. Many scientists on the summit of COPENHAGEN warned any rise above 2 degrees could lead to a sea level rise threatening islands and coastal cities, kill off many specie of animals and plants. As a result of, every nation should work together to limit the release of carbon dioxide. Everybody should shoulder the responsible to fight against climate change, and a low carbon life is a must.I think fight against global warming is part of environmental protection. If we humans are more friend to nature, nature will be friendly, too. It’s time everybody rethink our role in keeping peace with our mother, nature.
Yours sincerely,
Lihua
4.
假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
Hi, everyone. To let us get closely to nature and do more exercise, the Committee of our community will organise the activity. All residents they are interested in farming are invited to take part the activity. Weather permitted, we抣l ride bike to do some farming this Saturday o n a farm. It is about 5 kilometres far away from our community. You can grow some vegetables, plant some flowers and fed fish in the lake nearby. You will be trained and guide while farming. Not only will you enjoy the pleasure of labour and get relaxed, but also you can taste some fresh produce unless you are willing to. Everyone is welcome to attend!
5.
此題要求改正所給短文中的錯誤。對標有題號的每一行作出判斷：如無錯誤，則在該行右邊橫線上畫出一個勾（√）；如有錯誤（每行只有一個錯誤），則按下列情況改正：
此行多一個詞：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉，在此行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉；
此行缺一個詞：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（），在此行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞；
該行錯一個詞：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。
注意：原行沒有錯的不要改。
The Grand Canal is the longest canal in the world．It
76．
runs from Beijing to Hangzhou, by a distance of nearly
77．
1,800 kilometres．Most rivers in China run from．western to
78．
east, so the ancient rulers found necessary to dig a canal
79．
that run from the south to the north．In the year 605
AD,
80．
Emperor Yang Guang ordered the canal to be dug．Dig such
81．
a long canal was very difficult．3．6 million of people worked
82．
on them and in less than a year over half of them lost their
83．
lives．Before the construction was completed, the Grand
84．
Canal has been playing an important roles in transport． 85．
6.假定英語課上英語老師要求同桌之間互相修改作文，請你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在該詞下面寫出該加的詞。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1、每處錯誤及修改均僅限一詞。
2、只允許修改10處，多者（從11處起）不計分。
Thanks very much for your story. The plot is very touched. OK, now listen to me carefully. It’s very funny. One day, a young man was going from house to house on his street so he wanted to introduced him to all his new neighbors. Outside one house, he stopped and saw a big dog sitting on the sidewalk. Well, he thought that it was belonged to the people in the house, but he paid no attention to it. He just pressed the bell, and the owners asked him in, and the dog went in, either. He greeted them with a smile and then he sat down, and a couple gave him a cup of coffee and some cookies. Well, the dog ate one of the cookies off the plate, and sat in his knee. The young man don’t want to seem rude, so he petted the dog gentle and continued talking to the couple. Anyway, when it was time to go, he thanked them and left. When the young man left, the woman called after him, “Excuse me, don’t forget to take your dog!”
試卷答案
1.
One rainy day while I was walking home with one of my friend, a truck came to a stop
friends
besides us. The driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella because he found
beside
an
we were wet through. I stood there and couldn’t believe in that a complete stranger is
去掉
was
so thoughtful. The man insisted, so I grateful accepted the offer, thanked him and watched
gratefully
the truck disappear down the road. This man might need the umbrella himself, and he
but
preferred to give it to everyone else. It was a lesson to us that it was possible∧give without
someone
to
expect anything in return.
expecting
2.
Dear Tom,
I know there have trouble for you to communicate with others, and you
is
may often feel lonely. That’s why you are new from here and people don’t know
because
about you. But I think you can make it if you can follow the advices
advice
below.
First, you should take a active part in the discussions and show your own
an
opinions about the matters. At the same time, never fail to listening to other
listen
people’s views. Second, you should learn/ your classmates’ likes and
about
dislikes. Only in this way can you be able to get to know more different people
will
and show them that you are actually very friendly. Last but not least, I will
always be ready to help you. We can take part in some activities together, that I
where
can introduce you to others.
As time going on, people will know you better and be willing to make
With(或者把going改為goes)
friends with you.
Best regards.
Peter
3.1. prevent→prevention
2. aware∧ of
3.what → which
4.kill →killing
5.specie →species
6. result of → result
7. responsible →responsibility
8. fight → fighting
9. friend → friendly
10. rethink → rethought
4.
Hi, everyone. To let us get closely to nature and do more exercise, the
close
Committee of our community will organise the activity. All residents they
an
who/that
are interested in farming are invited to take part∧the activity. Weather
in
permitted, we’ll ride bike to do some farming this Saturday on a farm. It
permitting
bikes
is about 5 kilometres far away from our community. You can grow some
刪除
vegetables, plant some flowers and fed fish in the lake nearby. You will be
feed
trained and guide while farming. Not only will you enjoy the pleasure of
guided
labour and get relaxed, but also you can taste some fresh produce unless
if或將willing改為unwillingyou are willing to. Everyone is welcome to attend!
5.76. √
77. by → with
78. western → west
79. found后加it
80.run → ran
81. Dig → Digging
82.去掉million后面的of
83.第一個them → it
84. Before →Since
85.roles →role
6.
Thanks very much for your story. The plot is very touched. OK, now
1. touching
listen to me carefully. It’s very funny. One day, a young man was going
from house to house on his street so he wanted to introduced him to all
2. because
3.himself
his new neighbors. Outside one house, he stopped and saw a big dog
sitting on the sidewalk. Well, he thought that it was belonged to the
4.去掉was
people in the house, but he paid no attention to it. He just pressed the bell,
5.so
and the owners asked him in, and the dog went in, either. He greeted
6.too
them with a smile and then he sat down, and a couple gave him a cup of
7.the
coffee and some cookies. Well, the dog ate one of the cookies off the
plate, and sat in his knee. The young man don’t want to seem rude, so he
8.on
9.didn’t
petted the dog gentle and continued talking to the couple. Anyway, when
10.gently
it was time to go, he thanked them and left. When the young man left, the woman called after him, “Excuse me, don’t forget to take your dog!”
