2024屆高考英語二輪復習課件：書面表達七 3
· 英語 路漫漫其修遠兮 吾將上下而求索 高考二輪總復習 第一部分 微專題強化練 七 書面表達 第一部分 3 (半)開放式作文 考 向 分 析 考 題 引 路 強 化 訓 練 2 3 1 易 錯 防 范 4 考 向 分 析 年份 體裁 話題 命題形式 命題趨勢 2024湖北 夾敘夾議文 質疑促進學習 半開放 命題角度從考生日常的生活學習逐漸轉變到思想層面。要求更高，形式更靈活。 2024浙江 議論文 與同學有不同 觀點時選擇 半開放 考 題 引 路 Writing 1 (2024·福建) 如何理解“成功”，不同的人有不同的看法。請認真閱讀下面的引語(quotation)，按要求用英語寫一篇短文。 “Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm.” —Sir Winston，Churchill 內容要求： 1．你對該引語的理解； 2．你的相關經歷； 3．恰當的結尾。 注意： 1．短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數； 2．文中不能出現考生的具體信息； 3．詞數：120左右。 This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that_________ __________________________________________________ 立意與點撥： 項目 內容 “三定” 體裁：議論文 時態：一般現在時和一般過去時(講述個人經歷) 人稱：第一人稱 確定結構 三段論：闡釋名言→事例論證→得出結論 確定要點 ①名言含義：面對失敗，我們不應該泄氣，而是應該鼓足勇氣，充滿熱情地繼續堅持下去 ②個人經歷：學習騎自行車的例子 ③名言啟迪：如果我們不嘗試，我們就不可能成功，最重要的是學會堅持 答案： This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that we shouldn't get discouraged right after failures.Rather，we should keep trying with enthusiasm.Success consists in the ability to continue efforts through failures. At the age of twelve，I got a nice bike as a birthday gift.So excited was I that I couldn't wait to try my hand at riding it.However，it was harder than expected.The bike seemed too heavy and difficult to control.Worse still，I took many falls off the bike.I was about to give up when my father came and encouraged me to keep going.With more practice，I did better and better.Looking back，I feel had I lost heart I wouldn't be able to ride a bike. Actually，we can't succeed in everything we try.What's important is that we should stick at it. Writing 2 (2024·浙江) 在班級活動中，當你的想法與大多數同學不一致時，你是堅持自己的觀點并說服別人，還是尊重大多數同學的意見？請你以“When I Have a Different Opinion”為題，用英語寫一篇100～120個詞的短文。要求如下： 1．從以上兩種做法中選擇一種； 2．以具體事例闡述你選擇的理由。 注意：短文中，不得以任何形式透露地區、學校、同學姓名等真實信息。否則，按考試作弊行為認定。 When I Have a Different Opinion __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ 立意與點撥： 項目 內容 “三定” 體裁：議論文 時態：一般現在時和一般過去時(講述個人經歷) 人稱：第一人稱 確定結構 三段論：作出選擇→舉例證明→重申選擇 確定要點 ①選擇一種作法 ②對應個人經歷 ③重申選擇 答案： One possible student version： When I Have a Different Opinion
We may have different opinions in organizing class activities. We may have various ways to deal with such a situation. When I have a better idea，I would choose to stick to it. By doing so, I can not only share good ideas with others but also learn to express myself clearly.
Once we were discussing where to go for an outing. Most of my classmates wanted to go to a park while I had an idea of going to a nicer place. I managed to persuade my classmates into accepting my idea. We did have a good time that day. Good opinions are worth sticking to because they can benefit us all.
An alternative student version： When I Have a Different Opinion
We may have different opinions in organizing class activities. When I have a different opinion, I may choose to give it up and respect the opinion of the majority.
The main reason for my choice is that being brought up in a culture emphasizing collectivism, I tend to sacrifice my own interest for the group benefit. Once we were left to decide whether to have a picnic in a park or go to a museum. I would love to go to a museum, but most of my classmates wanted to go for a picnic. Without hesitation, I decided to follow them and we did have lots of fun that day. Sometimes giving up a little can mean getting more. 強 化 訓 練 （點此鏈接） 易 錯 防 范 審題急促，主次不分 根據下面的提示，用英語寫一篇120詞左右的短文。 (1)眼睛是心靈的窗口。 (2)學會如何保護眼睛。 __________________________________________________ 易錯分析：學生由于急于答題，所以往往審題不認真，極易把寫作重點放在眼睛的重要性上。 答案： People often say, “Eyes are the windows of soul”. All of us understand the importance of the eyes. But how to protect eyesight still remains a question among us students. If you want to take care of your eyesight, you must pay attention to the following points. Firstly, you should not use your eyes continuously for long periods. After you have read for a long time, about two hours or so, you take a rest by looking atsomething more distant. Secondly, you should keep your book about a foot away from your eyes when you read it.
You should also keep in mind: “Don't read in a dim light or in the sun; don't read in a moving bus or in bed.” Doing eye exercises regularly will help you keep good eyesight. If you fail to keep these rules, you will become short-sighted sooner or later. 解析：從題目的要求看，本篇作文要求寫成說明文。重點要放在如何保護眼睛上。例如：不要看書時間太長，眼睛與書的距離要適當，走路坐車時不要看書，要常做眼保健操等。如何保護眼睛這個問題比較好寫，因為考生有這方面的知識和體驗。開放式作文的答題思路與漢語作文非常相像。首先要明確主題，然后根據主題搭建文章的主體結構，即寫作提綱，接著進行文章血肉的填充。在擬寫作提綱時，要突出主題，有層次，先寫什么，后寫什么，要層次分明。
· 英語 路漫漫其修遠兮 吾將上下而求索 高考二輪總復習 第一部分 微專題強化練 七 書面表達 第一部分 3 (半)開放式作文 考 向 分 析 考 題 引 路 強 化 訓 練 2 3 1 易 錯 防 范 4 考 向 分 析 年份 體裁 話題 命題形式 命題趨勢 2024湖北 夾敘夾議文 質疑促進學習 半開放 命題角度從考生日常的生活學習逐漸轉變到思想層面。要求更高，形式更靈活。 2024浙江 議論文 與同學有不同 觀點時選擇 半開放 考 題 引 路 Writing 1 (2024·福建) 如何理解“成功”，不同的人有不同的看法。請認真閱讀下面的引語(quotation)，按要求用英語寫一篇短文。 “Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm.” —Sir Winston，Churchill 內容要求： 1．你對該引語的理解； 2．你的相關經歷； 3．恰當的結尾。 注意： 1．短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數； 2．文中不能出現考生的具體信息； 3．詞數：120左右。 This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that_________ __________________________________________________ 立意與點撥： 項目 內容 “三定” 體裁：議論文 時態：一般現在時和一般過去時(講述個人經歷) 人稱：第一人稱 確定結構 三段論：闡釋名言→事例論證→得出結論 確定要點 ①名言含義：面對失敗，我們不應該泄氣，而是應該鼓足勇氣，充滿熱情地繼續堅持下去 ②個人經歷：學習騎自行車的例子 ③名言啟迪：如果我們不嘗試，我們就不可能成功，最重要的是學會堅持 答案： This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that we shouldn't get discouraged right after failures.Rather，we should keep trying with enthusiasm.Success consists in the ability to continue efforts through failures. At the age of twelve，I got a nice bike as a birthday gift.So excited was I that I couldn't wait to try my hand at riding it.However，it was harder than expected.The bike seemed too heavy and difficult to control.Worse still，I took many falls off the bike.I was about to give up when my father came and encouraged me to keep going.With more practice，I did better and better.Looking back，I feel had I lost heart I wouldn't be able to ride a bike. Actually，we can't succeed in everything we try.What's important is that we should stick at it. Writing 2 (2024·浙江) 在班級活動中，當你的想法與大多數同學不一致時，你是堅持自己的觀點并說服別人，還是尊重大多數同學的意見？請你以“When I Have a Different Opinion”為題，用英語寫一篇100～120個詞的短文。要求如下： 1．從以上兩種做法中選擇一種； 2．以具體事例闡述你選擇的理由。 注意：短文中，不得以任何形式透露地區、學校、同學姓名等真實信息。否則，按考試作弊行為認定。 When I Have a Different Opinion __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ 立意與點撥： 項目 內容 “三定” 體裁：議論文 時態：一般現在時和一般過去時(講述個人經歷) 人稱：第一人稱 確定結構 三段論：作出選擇→舉例證明→重申選擇 確定要點 ①選擇一種作法 ②對應個人經歷 ③重申選擇 答案： One possible student version： When I Have a Different Opinion
We may have different opinions in organizing class activities. We may have various ways to deal with such a situation. When I have a better idea，I would choose to stick to it. By doing so, I can not only share good ideas with others but also learn to express myself clearly.
Once we were discussing where to go for an outing. Most of my classmates wanted to go to a park while I had an idea of going to a nicer place. I managed to persuade my classmates into accepting my idea. We did have a good time that day. Good opinions are worth sticking to because they can benefit us all.
An alternative student version： When I Have a Different Opinion
We may have different opinions in organizing class activities. When I have a different opinion, I may choose to give it up and respect the opinion of the majority.
The main reason for my choice is that being brought up in a culture emphasizing collectivism, I tend to sacrifice my own interest for the group benefit. Once we were left to decide whether to have a picnic in a park or go to a museum. I would love to go to a museum, but most of my classmates wanted to go for a picnic. Without hesitation, I decided to follow them and we did have lots of fun that day. Sometimes giving up a little can mean getting more. 強 化 訓 練 （點此鏈接） 易 錯 防 范 審題急促，主次不分 根據下面的提示，用英語寫一篇120詞左右的短文。 (1)眼睛是心靈的窗口。 (2)學會如何保護眼睛。 __________________________________________________ 易錯分析：學生由于急于答題，所以往往審題不認真，極易把寫作重點放在眼睛的重要性上。 答案： People often say, “Eyes are the windows of soul”. All of us understand the importance of the eyes. But how to protect eyesight still remains a question among us students. If you want to take care of your eyesight, you must pay attention to the following points. Firstly, you should not use your eyes continuously for long periods. After you have read for a long time, about two hours or so, you take a rest by looking atsomething more distant. Secondly, you should keep your book about a foot away from your eyes when you read it.
You should also keep in mind: “Don't read in a dim light or in the sun; don't read in a moving bus or in bed.” Doing eye exercises regularly will help you keep good eyesight. If you fail to keep these rules, you will become short-sighted sooner or later. 解析：從題目的要求看，本篇作文要求寫成說明文。重點要放在如何保護眼睛上。例如：不要看書時間太長，眼睛與書的距離要適當，走路坐車時不要看書，要常做眼保健操等。如何保護眼睛這個問題比較好寫，因為考生有這方面的知識和體驗。開放式作文的答題思路與漢語作文非常相像。首先要明確主題，然后根據主題搭建文章的主體結構，即寫作提綱，接著進行文章血肉的填充。在擬寫作提綱時，要突出主題，有層次，先寫什么，后寫什么，要層次分明。
