浙江省2024高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)專題訓(xùn)練：短文改錯+書面表達(dá)（75）

　　浙江省2024高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)專題訓(xùn)練：短文改錯+書面表達(dá)（）第一節(jié) 短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）

　　假如英語課上老師要求同學(xué)們交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，要求你在錯誤的地方增加、刪除、或修改某個單詞。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫上該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。

　　注意：1. 每次錯誤以及修改均限一詞；

　　2. 只允許修改10處，多者從第十一處起不計分

　　When I walked into the classroom, the teacher was handing in the exam papers. I was feeling very nervously. I had not studied at all at the weekend as I had thought it would be easy test. I went through the test many times but I could not only answer three out from the twenty questions. I did not want to fail the exam. Then, I put my book under my desk, opening it and started looking for the answer. The teacher wasn't looking at me, but I copied something. Suddenly, I felt a hand on his shoulder! The teacher caught me cheating. I don't know what to say. Luckily, the teacher did not punish me for cheating but instead gave me a second chance.

　　第二節(jié) 書面表達(dá)（滿分30分）

　　你校校報英語欄目正在征集以“Cooperation and Competition in Study”為題目的英語短文，請你寫一篇120~150詞的短文向校報投稿。文章要包括以下要點：

　　1. 有人認(rèn)為學(xué)習(xí)中應(yīng)該有競爭;

　　2. 有人認(rèn)為學(xué)習(xí)中需要的是合作;

　　3. 你的看法。

　　Line 1: in ( out

　　Line 2: nervously ( nervous;

　　easy前加an

　　Line 3: 去掉 ; from ( of

　　Line 4: opening ( opened

　　Line 5: answer ( answers;

　　Line 6: but ( so; his (my

　　Line 7: don’t ( didn’t

　　作文

　　【參考范文】

　　Some people believe that competition is necessary in study. Students can be stimulated to work harder, especially when they see their classmates achieving more academically or in other areas. In addition, students themselves can overcome their shortcomings through competition.

　　Yet people holding different opinions argue that cooperation instead of competition is what is needed in study. Cooperation can cultivate students’ awareness of team spirits, which plays an important part in their growth. And most importantly, only those with team spirit can get along well with their future colleagues in work and can deal with personal relationships effectively.

　　As far as I am concerned, both cooperation and competition are of equal significance in study. They are just like one’s left hand and right hand. Without either of them, one’s study will be lacking in well-roundedness.

　　浙江省2024高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)專題訓(xùn)練：短文改錯+書面表達(dá)（）第一節(jié) 短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）

　　假如英語課上老師要求同學(xué)們交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，要求你在錯誤的地方增加、刪除、或修改某個單詞。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫上該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。

　　注意：1. 每次錯誤以及修改均限一詞；

　　2. 只允許修改10處，多者從第十一處起不計分

　　When I walked into the classroom, the teacher was handing in the exam papers. I was feeling very nervously. I had not studied at all at the weekend as I had thought it would be easy test. I went through the test many times but I could not only answer three out from the twenty questions. I did not want to fail the exam. Then, I put my book under my desk, opening it and started looking for the answer. The teacher wasn't looking at me, but I copied something. Suddenly, I felt a hand on his shoulder! The teacher caught me cheating. I don't know what to say. Luckily, the teacher did not punish me for cheating but instead gave me a second chance.

　　第二節(jié) 書面表達(dá)（滿分30分）

　　你校校報英語欄目正在征集以“Cooperation and Competition in Study”為題目的英語短文，請你寫一篇120~150詞的短文向校報投稿。文章要包括以下要點：

　　1. 有人認(rèn)為學(xué)習(xí)中應(yīng)該有競爭;

　　2. 有人認(rèn)為學(xué)習(xí)中需要的是合作;

　　3. 你的看法。

　　Line 1: in ( out

　　Line 2: nervously ( nervous;

　　easy前加an

　　Line 3: 去掉 ; from ( of

　　Line 4: opening ( opened

　　Line 5: answer ( answers;

　　Line 6: but ( so; his (my

　　Line 7: don’t ( didn’t

　　作文

　　【參考范文】

　　Some people believe that competition is necessary in study. Students can be stimulated to work harder, especially when they see their classmates achieving more academically or in other areas. In addition, students themselves can overcome their shortcomings through competition.

　　Yet people holding different opinions argue that cooperation instead of competition is what is needed in study. Cooperation can cultivate students’ awareness of team spirits, which plays an important part in their growth. And most importantly, only those with team spirit can get along well with their future colleagues in work and can deal with personal relationships effectively.

　　As far as I am concerned, both cooperation and competition are of equal significance in study. They are just like one’s left hand and right hand. Without either of them, one’s study will be lacking in well-roundedness.