2024屆高考英語牛津譯林版一輪寫作能力提升課件：第10講 常用時態在寫作中的應用
譯林卷區版
英語 第10講
常用時態在寫作中的應用 ——選準時機，表達清晰 一、魔法導航 時態錯誤是學生在英語書面表達中經常出現的問題之一。在寫作中選擇合適 的時態對于保證語言的準確和清晰起著非常重要的作用。 ?投“時”問路 在寫作中常用的時態主要有一般過去時、過去進行時、一般現在時、現在進 行時、現在完成時、一般將來時,大家應對這幾種時態的用法熟記于心并在 實踐中力求熟能生巧。 1.一般過去時:表示過去某個時間發生的動作、存在的狀態或過去習慣性的動 作。一般過去時不強調動作對現在的影響,只說明過去的情況。 ?雕詞琢句 (1)On May 12, 2008, ????(一場地震幾乎破壞了學校里的所有東西), leaving the buildings badly-damaged.
?答案 a earthquake destroyed almost everything in the school
(2)聽到他說的話,我抑制不住自己的眼淚。(2024湖南) ??
?? ?答案 When hearing what he said, I couldn't hold back my tears.
2.過去進行時:表示過去某時正在進行的動作或狀態。 ?雕詞琢句 (1)Last Monday, ????(我們正在上語文課) when the teacher suddenly slipped and fell.
?答案 we were having our Chinese class (2)老師進入教室的時候,我正在玩電腦游戲。(2024重慶) ?
??? ?答案 When the teacher entered the classroom, I was playing computer games.
3.一般現在時:表示現在經常、反復發生的動作、存在的狀態或習慣性的動 作。 ?雕詞琢句 (1)But I have some difficulties with note-taking and ????(我不知道如 何使用圖書館).
?答案 I have no idea how to use the library (2)在我們的文化中它是一個為老人設立的日子。(2024課標全國Ⅱ) ?
??? ?答案 It is a day for the elderly in our culture.
4.現在進行時:表示現在或當前一段時間正在進行的動作。 ?雕詞琢句 I ????(現在給你寫信) to draw your attention to some improper behav- ior among us students: littering and scribbling.
?答案 am writing 5.現在完成時:用來表示現在之前已發生過或完成的動作或狀態,但其結果卻 和現在有聯系,也就是說,動作或狀態發生在過去但它的影響現在還存在。 ?雕詞琢句 (1)Years of school life ????(已經教給了我很多東西), of which team- work is the most important for me.
?答案 has taught me a lot of things
(2)在幾項英語活動中,我已經成功地向她伸出援手。(2024陜西) ?
??? ?答案 Successfully, I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activi ties.
6.一般將來時:表示將來某一時刻要發生的動作或存在的狀態,或將來某一段 時間內經常發生的動作或存在的狀態。 ?雕詞琢句 (1)We are very glad to know that ????(你將在6月26日來我們學校), and now it's my pleasure to introduce our school to you.
?答案 you'll come to our school on June 26th (2)今年七月參加夏令營的時候我們將帶著這些書到你們學校。(2024天津) ?
??? ?答案 We will take the books to your school when participating in the summer
camp this July. ?時態選秀 盡管時態的使用千變萬化,但在書面表達中卻“有章可循、有律可遵”,現總 結如下: 1.敘事主要用一般過去時。 ?雕詞琢句 Last weekend, ????(我父母和我一塊兒到桂林去旅游),where we spent a happy time together and learned more about local traditions and culture.
?答案 my parents as well as I went on a trip to Guilin 2.表述觀點或議論文中主要使用一般現在時。 ?雕詞琢句 Personally, ????(我更喜歡在團隊里工作), which offers me a chance to learn how to get along with others and to share my experiences with them.
?答案 I prefer to work in a team 3.說明文主要使用一般現在時。 ?雕詞琢句 Every student can do something for our environment in daily life. For example, remember to turn off the lights in time ????(晚上在你離開教室之前). ?答案 before you leave the classroom in the evening
4.介紹客觀情況常用一般現在時。 ?雕詞琢句 The survey shows that half of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols, while ????(48%的男孩子選擇體育明星). ?答案 48% of the boys choose sports stars
二、學以致用 1.完美文章 根據所給提示完成下面短文,注意時態。 Located beside the Yangtze River,my hometown is a beautiful place now.In the past,(1)????(它是個貧窮的村莊,在那里人們過著艱難的生 活). However,(2)????(在過去的20年里發生了巨大的變化) here, thanks to the good policy of the Party.To begin with,a large number of new hous- es have been set up which are equipped with modern appliances such as comput- ers,fridges,TV sets,washing machines and so on.What's more,there is a large su- permarket in it,(3)????(那里有人們需要的各種各樣的商品). Much to our delight,(4)????(一所更大的學校正在建設當中). There is no doubt that (5)????(孩子們將會接受更好的教育)by the time it has been put into use,because lots of modern teaching facilities will be used in the new school,(6)????(它們將幫助老師使課堂變得生 動有趣). Such is my hometown (7)????(在這里所有的人們正過著幸福 的生活).And I am sure(8)????(它將會變成一個更加迷人和舒 適的地方) to live in with the development of economy and society as well. ?答案 (1)it was a poor village where people led a hard life (2)in the past twenty years great changes have taken place
(3)where there are varieties of goods that people need (4)a much bigger school is being built (5)the children will receive a better education (6)which will help teachers make their classes lively and interesting (7)where all the people are living a happy life (8)it will become a more charming and comfortable place
2.話題寫作 [本期話題] 書信交流 [寫作要求] 正確使用時態進行短文寫作。 根據下面的信息提示,寫一篇70詞左右的英語短文。 1.我是四川的一名學生李華,從小就是一名大熊貓愛好者; 2.三年前,我很高興得知大熊貓白云生了它的女兒蘇林; 3.在你們網站上我一直關注著蘇林的成長; 4.得知它在你們動物園生活得非常好,我很高興; 5.明年夏天我去美國的時候要去動物園看它; 6.非常感謝你們為照顧大熊貓付出的勞動。???
答案 One possible version: I am Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. I have been a panda lover since I was a child. Three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I have been watching her growth on your website. When learning Sulin is living well in your zoo now, I am very happy. I will visit her when I go to America next summer.
Thank you very much for your caring for the pandas.
三、美文賞讀 (2024山東) 某英文報社組織題為“我喜歡的英語諺語”征文活動,你有意參加。請從下 面兩句諺語中任選一句作為標題寫一篇英語作文,內容須包括:1.該諺語的含 義;2.體現該諺語含義的個人經歷。 ①A friend in need is a friend indeed.
②Where there's a will,there's a way. 注意: 1.詞數120~150; 2.文中不得透露個人姓名和學校名稱。 參考詞匯: 諺語 proverb
[我來試寫]??
??? ?答案 One possible version: Where there is a will,there is a way. I first saw this sentence when I entered junior high school.The moment I came in- to the classroom,I saw the sentence on the blackboard. I like the proverb because it tells a valuable philosophy of life.Achieving our
goals is always not easy,but if we have a strong will,we are sure to realize them. Once I was not good at English.I didn't know enough English words and my grammar was also poor,which really made me upset.Fortunately,my English teacher noticed my bad situation and said to me,“Don't lose heart.Remember: where there is a will,there is a way.” Suddenly,I was reminded of the sentence on the blackboard. From then on,I had worked hard on my English and it finally paid off.My English improved a lot,and more importantly,I gained much confidence. 【寫作點評】 本文根據行文的需要,恰當地運用了一般過去時、一般現在時等時態,準確地 表達了句意,出色地完成了寫作任務。
譯林卷區版
英語 第10講
常用時態在寫作中的應用 ——選準時機，表達清晰 一、魔法導航 時態錯誤是學生在英語書面表達中經常出現的問題之一。在寫作中選擇合適 的時態對于保證語言的準確和清晰起著非常重要的作用。 ?投“時”問路 在寫作中常用的時態主要有一般過去時、過去進行時、一般現在時、現在進 行時、現在完成時、一般將來時,大家應對這幾種時態的用法熟記于心并在 實踐中力求熟能生巧。 1.一般過去時:表示過去某個時間發生的動作、存在的狀態或過去習慣性的動 作。一般過去時不強調動作對現在的影響,只說明過去的情況。 ?雕詞琢句 (1)On May 12, 2008, ????(一場地震幾乎破壞了學校里的所有東西), leaving the buildings badly-damaged.
?答案 a earthquake destroyed almost everything in the school
(2)聽到他說的話,我抑制不住自己的眼淚。(2024湖南) ??
?? ?答案 When hearing what he said, I couldn't hold back my tears.
2.過去進行時:表示過去某時正在進行的動作或狀態。 ?雕詞琢句 (1)Last Monday, ????(我們正在上語文課) when the teacher suddenly slipped and fell.
?答案 we were having our Chinese class (2)老師進入教室的時候,我正在玩電腦游戲。(2024重慶) ?
??? ?答案 When the teacher entered the classroom, I was playing computer games.
3.一般現在時:表示現在經常、反復發生的動作、存在的狀態或習慣性的動 作。 ?雕詞琢句 (1)But I have some difficulties with note-taking and ????(我不知道如 何使用圖書館).
?答案 I have no idea how to use the library (2)在我們的文化中它是一個為老人設立的日子。(2024課標全國Ⅱ) ?
??? ?答案 It is a day for the elderly in our culture.
4.現在進行時:表示現在或當前一段時間正在進行的動作。 ?雕詞琢句 I ????(現在給你寫信) to draw your attention to some improper behav- ior among us students: littering and scribbling.
?答案 am writing 5.現在完成時:用來表示現在之前已發生過或完成的動作或狀態,但其結果卻 和現在有聯系,也就是說,動作或狀態發生在過去但它的影響現在還存在。 ?雕詞琢句 (1)Years of school life ????(已經教給了我很多東西), of which team- work is the most important for me.
?答案 has taught me a lot of things
(2)在幾項英語活動中,我已經成功地向她伸出援手。(2024陜西) ?
??? ?答案 Successfully, I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activi ties.
6.一般將來時:表示將來某一時刻要發生的動作或存在的狀態,或將來某一段 時間內經常發生的動作或存在的狀態。 ?雕詞琢句 (1)We are very glad to know that ????(你將在6月26日來我們學校), and now it's my pleasure to introduce our school to you.
?答案 you'll come to our school on June 26th (2)今年七月參加夏令營的時候我們將帶著這些書到你們學校。(2024天津) ?
??? ?答案 We will take the books to your school when participating in the summer
camp this July. ?時態選秀 盡管時態的使用千變萬化,但在書面表達中卻“有章可循、有律可遵”,現總 結如下: 1.敘事主要用一般過去時。 ?雕詞琢句 Last weekend, ????(我父母和我一塊兒到桂林去旅游),where we spent a happy time together and learned more about local traditions and culture.
?答案 my parents as well as I went on a trip to Guilin 2.表述觀點或議論文中主要使用一般現在時。 ?雕詞琢句 Personally, ????(我更喜歡在團隊里工作), which offers me a chance to learn how to get along with others and to share my experiences with them.
?答案 I prefer to work in a team 3.說明文主要使用一般現在時。 ?雕詞琢句 Every student can do something for our environment in daily life. For example, remember to turn off the lights in time ????(晚上在你離開教室之前). ?答案 before you leave the classroom in the evening
4.介紹客觀情況常用一般現在時。 ?雕詞琢句 The survey shows that half of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols, while ????(48%的男孩子選擇體育明星). ?答案 48% of the boys choose sports stars
二、學以致用 1.完美文章 根據所給提示完成下面短文,注意時態。 Located beside the Yangtze River,my hometown is a beautiful place now.In the past,(1)????(它是個貧窮的村莊,在那里人們過著艱難的生 活). However,(2)????(在過去的20年里發生了巨大的變化) here, thanks to the good policy of the Party.To begin with,a large number of new hous- es have been set up which are equipped with modern appliances such as comput- ers,fridges,TV sets,washing machines and so on.What's more,there is a large su- permarket in it,(3)????(那里有人們需要的各種各樣的商品). Much to our delight,(4)????(一所更大的學校正在建設當中). There is no doubt that (5)????(孩子們將會接受更好的教育)by the time it has been put into use,because lots of modern teaching facilities will be used in the new school,(6)????(它們將幫助老師使課堂變得生 動有趣). Such is my hometown (7)????(在這里所有的人們正過著幸福 的生活).And I am sure(8)????(它將會變成一個更加迷人和舒 適的地方) to live in with the development of economy and society as well. ?答案 (1)it was a poor village where people led a hard life (2)in the past twenty years great changes have taken place
(3)where there are varieties of goods that people need (4)a much bigger school is being built (5)the children will receive a better education (6)which will help teachers make their classes lively and interesting (7)where all the people are living a happy life (8)it will become a more charming and comfortable place
2.話題寫作 [本期話題] 書信交流 [寫作要求] 正確使用時態進行短文寫作。 根據下面的信息提示,寫一篇70詞左右的英語短文。 1.我是四川的一名學生李華,從小就是一名大熊貓愛好者; 2.三年前,我很高興得知大熊貓白云生了它的女兒蘇林; 3.在你們網站上我一直關注著蘇林的成長; 4.得知它在你們動物園生活得非常好,我很高興; 5.明年夏天我去美國的時候要去動物園看它; 6.非常感謝你們為照顧大熊貓付出的勞動。???
答案 One possible version: I am Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. I have been a panda lover since I was a child. Three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I have been watching her growth on your website. When learning Sulin is living well in your zoo now, I am very happy. I will visit her when I go to America next summer.
Thank you very much for your caring for the pandas.
三、美文賞讀 (2024山東) 某英文報社組織題為“我喜歡的英語諺語”征文活動,你有意參加。請從下 面兩句諺語中任選一句作為標題寫一篇英語作文,內容須包括:1.該諺語的含 義;2.體現該諺語含義的個人經歷。 ①A friend in need is a friend indeed.
②Where there's a will,there's a way. 注意: 1.詞數120~150; 2.文中不得透露個人姓名和學校名稱。 參考詞匯: 諺語 proverb
[我來試寫]??
??? ?答案 One possible version: Where there is a will,there is a way. I first saw this sentence when I entered junior high school.The moment I came in- to the classroom,I saw the sentence on the blackboard. I like the proverb because it tells a valuable philosophy of life.Achieving our
goals is always not easy,but if we have a strong will,we are sure to realize them. Once I was not good at English.I didn't know enough English words and my grammar was also poor,which really made me upset.Fortunately,my English teacher noticed my bad situation and said to me,“Don't lose heart.Remember: where there is a will,there is a way.” Suddenly,I was reminded of the sentence on the blackboard. From then on,I had worked hard on my English and it finally paid off.My English improved a lot,and more importantly,I gained much confidence. 【寫作點評】 本文根據行文的需要,恰當地運用了一般過去時、一般現在時等時態,準確地 表達了句意,出色地完成了寫作任務。
