2024屆高考英語二輪復習隨堂訓練：短文改錯 1（含解析）
隨堂訓練
Ⅰ. 單句改錯
1. In spite of this, the number of people having mobile phones are increasing steadily.
【解析】are→is。主語是the number of people, 故謂語是單數。
2. “Taking some fish to my horse! ”he called out to the waiter.
【解析】Taking→Take。祈使句句首的動詞用原形。
3. “Sorry, sir. But a horse didn’t eat fish! ”the waiter answered.
【解析】didn’t→doesn’t。馬不吃魚, 表示客觀事實, 用一般現在時。
4. They are afraid I’ll be knocked down by a truck, fallen off a tree, or fight with others.
【解析】fallen→fall。be, fall, fight是由并列連詞or連接的并列謂語, 時態應該一致。
5. I hope I will admitted into a top university and become a good doctor after I graduate from university.
【解析】在will后加be。be admitted into被錄取, 是固定短語。
6. People have found mobile phones convenience.
【解析】convenience→convenient。此處用了“find +賓語+形容詞作賓語補足語”。
7. I know you are particular interested in human rights.
【解析】particular→particularly。此處修飾動詞, 用副詞。
8. To make matters bad, now I have to share a room with my younger sister, Maggie.
【解析】bad→worse。to make matters worse為固定短語, 意為“更糟糕的是”, 常用作插入語。
9. To see a horse eat fish, all of them ran out. Having the whole room to himself, my uncle sat down besides the fire and began warm himself.
【解析】①besides→beside。句意: 屋子里只剩下我叔叔自己, 他坐在火堆旁邊開始取暖。beside在……旁邊; besides除……之外還有。②warm前加to。begin to do sth. 開始做某事。
10. There is a teacher whom I can never forget in my life. She was very strict to us.
【解析】to→with。be strict with嚴格要求。
Ⅱ. 短文改錯
1
One Sunday morning, my grandmother and I went to the West Lake together happy, where we found a girl cry by a roadside. We went up to her, asking what her name was but where she lived. But she knew something about it. So we had no choice but send her to the police station of the park. There he was taken good care of. Soon the news of the lost girl was being broadcast. After some time in came the parents of the girl. They were too excited to see their daughter that they expressed their thank to us. In the end we say goodbye to each other.
答案:
One Sunday morning, my grandmother and I went to the West Lake together happy, where we found a girl cry by a roadside. We went up to her, asking what her
happily
crying
name was but where she lived. But she knew something about it. So we had no
and
nothing
choice but ∧send her to the police station of the park. There he was taken good
to
she
care of. Soon the news of the lost girl was being broadcast. After some time in came the parents of the girl. They were too excited to see their daughter that they expressed
so
their thank to us. In the end we say goodbye to each other.
thanks
said
1. 【解析】第一句中的happy→happily。考查副詞。修飾動詞went用副詞。
2. 【解析】第一句中的cry→crying。考查非謂語動詞。a girl和cry之間是主動關系, 故用現在分詞作賓語補足語, 此處表示發現一個女孩正在路邊哭。
3. 【解析】第二句中的but→and。考查并列連詞。此處表示順承關系。
4. 【解析】第三句中的something→nothing。考查代詞。句意: 但她什么也不知道。
5. 【解析】第四句中的but后加to。考查句式。have no choice but to do別無選擇只能做……。
6. 【解析】第五句中的he→she。考查代詞。前后人稱應該一致, 全文都是在說女孩, 故用she。
7. 【解析】第六句中去掉being。考查時態。句子沒有表示正在被播報, 故去掉being。
8. 【解析】第八句中的too→so。考查狀語從句的連接詞。so. . . that. . . 如此……以至于……。
9. 【解析】第八句中的thank→thanks。考查名詞。動詞express后用名詞, thank用復數形式。
10. 【解析】第九句中的say→said。考查時態。整篇文章的時態是過去時, 故用said。
2
Someone asks me what on the earth happiness means? I can’t give you the exactly definition of it, and I’m sure if you love and help others, you’ll get it.
I’ll never forget an old lady. She lives a small house alone. It’s said that her husband and her son died in a traffic accident. How bitter her life is! But the old lady often helped others with a smile. Wherever it snows, she is always the first to clean the paths. She looks after several children living nearby. I am one of those. I often remember the stories she told about us and her kind smile. Perhaps she is lucky, but I think she is a happy person. Her life full of laughter and love.
答案:
Someone asks me what on the earth happiness means? I can’t give you the exactly definition of it, and I’m sure if you love and help others, you’ll get it.
exact
but
I’ll never forget an old lady. She lives ∧a small house alone. It’s said that her
in
husband and her son died in a traffic accident. How bitter her life is! But the old lady often helped others with a smile. Wherever it snows, she is always the first to clean
helps
Whenever
the paths. She looks after several children living nearby. I am one of those. I often
them
remember the stories she told about us and her kind smile. Perhaps she is lucky, but I
unlucky
think she is a happy person. Her life∧full of laughter and love.
is
1. 【解析】第一句中去掉the。on earth究竟。
2. 【解析】第二句中的exactly→exact。形容詞作定語, 修飾名詞。
3. 【解析】第二句中and→but。此處表示轉折。
4. 【解析】第四句中lives后面加in。live是不及物動詞, 后面接賓語時要加介詞in。
5. 【解析】第七句中helped→helps。本文主要用現在時態, 并且often也是一個提示, 所以用一般現在時。
6. 【解析】第八句中Wherever→Whenever。根據句意, 無論何時下雪, 她都是第一個清掃道路的人。
7. 【解析】第十句中those→them。此處指代上文出現過的children, 故用them。
8. 【解析】第十一句中去掉about。tell是及物動詞, 后面可以直接接賓語, 此處不需要介詞。
9. 【解析】第十二句中lucky→unlucky。根據句意, 也許她是不幸的, 但是我認為她是個幸福的人。
10. 【解析】第十三句中life后面加is。本句缺謂語, full是形容詞, 不能作謂語, 所以添加系動詞。
隨堂訓練
Ⅰ. 單句改錯
1. In spite of this, the number of people having mobile phones are increasing steadily.
【解析】are→is。主語是the number of people, 故謂語是單數。
2. “Taking some fish to my horse! ”he called out to the waiter.
【解析】Taking→Take。祈使句句首的動詞用原形。
3. “Sorry, sir. But a horse didn’t eat fish! ”the waiter answered.
【解析】didn’t→doesn’t。馬不吃魚, 表示客觀事實, 用一般現在時。
4. They are afraid I’ll be knocked down by a truck, fallen off a tree, or fight with others.
【解析】fallen→fall。be, fall, fight是由并列連詞or連接的并列謂語, 時態應該一致。
5. I hope I will admitted into a top university and become a good doctor after I graduate from university.
【解析】在will后加be。be admitted into被錄取, 是固定短語。
6. People have found mobile phones convenience.
【解析】convenience→convenient。此處用了“find +賓語+形容詞作賓語補足語”。
7. I know you are particular interested in human rights.
【解析】particular→particularly。此處修飾動詞, 用副詞。
8. To make matters bad, now I have to share a room with my younger sister, Maggie.
【解析】bad→worse。to make matters worse為固定短語, 意為“更糟糕的是”, 常用作插入語。
9. To see a horse eat fish, all of them ran out. Having the whole room to himself, my uncle sat down besides the fire and began warm himself.
【解析】①besides→beside。句意: 屋子里只剩下我叔叔自己, 他坐在火堆旁邊開始取暖。beside在……旁邊; besides除……之外還有。②warm前加to。begin to do sth. 開始做某事。
10. There is a teacher whom I can never forget in my life. She was very strict to us.
【解析】to→with。be strict with嚴格要求。
Ⅱ. 短文改錯
1
One Sunday morning, my grandmother and I went to the West Lake together happy, where we found a girl cry by a roadside. We went up to her, asking what her name was but where she lived. But she knew something about it. So we had no choice but send her to the police station of the park. There he was taken good care of. Soon the news of the lost girl was being broadcast. After some time in came the parents of the girl. They were too excited to see their daughter that they expressed their thank to us. In the end we say goodbye to each other.
答案:
One Sunday morning, my grandmother and I went to the West Lake together happy, where we found a girl cry by a roadside. We went up to her, asking what her
happily
crying
name was but where she lived. But she knew something about it. So we had no
and
nothing
choice but ∧send her to the police station of the park. There he was taken good
to
she
care of. Soon the news of the lost girl was being broadcast. After some time in came the parents of the girl. They were too excited to see their daughter that they expressed
so
their thank to us. In the end we say goodbye to each other.
thanks
said
1. 【解析】第一句中的happy→happily。考查副詞。修飾動詞went用副詞。
2. 【解析】第一句中的cry→crying。考查非謂語動詞。a girl和cry之間是主動關系, 故用現在分詞作賓語補足語, 此處表示發現一個女孩正在路邊哭。
3. 【解析】第二句中的but→and。考查并列連詞。此處表示順承關系。
4. 【解析】第三句中的something→nothing。考查代詞。句意: 但她什么也不知道。
5. 【解析】第四句中的but后加to。考查句式。have no choice but to do別無選擇只能做……。
6. 【解析】第五句中的he→she。考查代詞。前后人稱應該一致, 全文都是在說女孩, 故用she。
7. 【解析】第六句中去掉being。考查時態。句子沒有表示正在被播報, 故去掉being。
8. 【解析】第八句中的too→so。考查狀語從句的連接詞。so. . . that. . . 如此……以至于……。
9. 【解析】第八句中的thank→thanks。考查名詞。動詞express后用名詞, thank用復數形式。
10. 【解析】第九句中的say→said。考查時態。整篇文章的時態是過去時, 故用said。
2
Someone asks me what on the earth happiness means? I can’t give you the exactly definition of it, and I’m sure if you love and help others, you’ll get it.
I’ll never forget an old lady. She lives a small house alone. It’s said that her husband and her son died in a traffic accident. How bitter her life is! But the old lady often helped others with a smile. Wherever it snows, she is always the first to clean the paths. She looks after several children living nearby. I am one of those. I often remember the stories she told about us and her kind smile. Perhaps she is lucky, but I think she is a happy person. Her life full of laughter and love.
答案:
Someone asks me what on the earth happiness means? I can’t give you the exactly definition of it, and I’m sure if you love and help others, you’ll get it.
exact
but
I’ll never forget an old lady. She lives ∧a small house alone. It’s said that her
in
husband and her son died in a traffic accident. How bitter her life is! But the old lady often helped others with a smile. Wherever it snows, she is always the first to clean
helps
Whenever
the paths. She looks after several children living nearby. I am one of those. I often
them
remember the stories she told about us and her kind smile. Perhaps she is lucky, but I
unlucky
think she is a happy person. Her life∧full of laughter and love.
is
1. 【解析】第一句中去掉the。on earth究竟。
2. 【解析】第二句中的exactly→exact。形容詞作定語, 修飾名詞。
3. 【解析】第二句中and→but。此處表示轉折。
4. 【解析】第四句中lives后面加in。live是不及物動詞, 后面接賓語時要加介詞in。
5. 【解析】第七句中helped→helps。本文主要用現在時態, 并且often也是一個提示, 所以用一般現在時。
6. 【解析】第八句中Wherever→Whenever。根據句意, 無論何時下雪, 她都是第一個清掃道路的人。
7. 【解析】第十句中those→them。此處指代上文出現過的children, 故用them。
8. 【解析】第十一句中去掉about。tell是及物動詞, 后面可以直接接賓語, 此處不需要介詞。
9. 【解析】第十二句中lucky→unlucky。根據句意, 也許她是不幸的, 但是我認為她是個幸福的人。
10. 【解析】第十三句中life后面加is。本句缺謂語, full是形容詞, 不能作謂語, 所以添加系動詞。
