2024屆高考英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)書面表達(dá)專項通關(guān)：提分秘籍

　　提分秘籍

　　十句作文法是有關(guān)專家總結(jié)出來的一種高分作文方法，考生在經(jīng)過短期訓(xùn)練之后便可較大幅度地提高寫作水平。其基本模式為：

　　第一段為開頭，包括兩句。第一句為主題句，點明全文主題；第二句為擴展句，進(jìn)一步說明和支持主題句。兩者關(guān)系也可倒過來，由第一句說明情況，第二句點明主題。

　　第二段為正文，共七句。第三句為主題句，提出本段的主題，它應(yīng)與第一段的主題相關(guān)或一致。第四至八句為擴展句（支撐句），說明和支持本段的主題。第九句為照應(yīng)句，用來回扣第二段的開頭。句與句之間要注意好過渡，以使段落邏輯合理，結(jié)構(gòu)得當(dāng)。

　　第三段為結(jié)尾，簡化為一句，也是全文的總結(jié)句， 它將前面的內(nèi)容總結(jié)為一個結(jié)果，表明自己的論點。

　　注意

　　要提高語言表達(dá)的檔次，在句式運用上就不能一味地使用簡單句和陳述句，而應(yīng)該根據(jù)實際情況靈活運用所學(xué)的各種句式。豐富的句式有助于考生在高考中出類拔萃，贏得高分。另外，十句和三段式書面表達(dá)方法只是一種簡單實用的形式，可以有很多的變通。例如：每一段的句子完全可以根據(jù)情況和需要進(jìn)行調(diào)整，最后一段的句子完全沒必要只有一句話，當(dāng)然，又臭又長的結(jié)尾和云里霧里的開頭都是讓人討厭和出力不討好的事情。

　　過渡詞

　　要學(xué)會使用過渡詞。過渡詞猶如“橋梁”和“粘合劑 ”。恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂眠^渡詞可避免結(jié)構(gòu)松散，層次分明，表意不清等弊端，使文章條理清楚，文字連貫流暢。常用的過渡詞有：

　　遞進(jìn)型：also, besides, what’s more, moreover, furthermore, in addition, even, what’s worse, worse still, to make matters/things worse, not only …but also等

　　解釋型：that is (to say), in other words, or, in fact, in reality, as a matter of fact等

　　轉(zhuǎn)折型：however, but, yet, nevertheless, instead, on the contrary, on the other hand等

　　列舉型：firstly…secondly…finally, on the one hand, on the other hand, for one thing, for another (thing)等

　　舉例型：for example, for instance, such as, that is, like, take… for example等

　　因果型：because (of), since, now that, thanks to, due to; thus, therefore, as a result (consequence),so… that,

　　so that等

　　讓步型：though, although, in spite of, despite, even though, even if等

　　順序型：first…next…and then…finally, first…then…after that…finally等

　　并列型：and, both…and, or, either…or, as well as等

　　時間型：afterwards, soon, later, the moment/ immediately/ , hardly…when, no sooner…than, be about to do something when… be on the point of doing something when…等

　　總結(jié)型：in a/one word, to sum up, in short, on the whole, in conclusion, every coins has two sides

　　見解型：as for me，in my opinion, personally speaking, as far as I am concerned，I’m sure等

　　條件型：if, as long as, so long as, on condition that , unless等

　　開頭句

　　論述的展開提出觀點：

　　No one would deny that…

　　Now it is widely believed that…

　　When it comes to…, some think…

　　There is a public debate today that...

　　A is a common way of…, but is it a wise one?

　　Recently the problem has been brought into focus that+同位語從句

　　Different people hold different opinions.

　　Opinions are divided.

　　People have taken/adopted different attitudes towards…

　　With the rapid improvement in…/growing awareness of…, more and more…(e.g. With the rapid improvement in building industry, more and more structures are being erected to set the people‘s minds at ease.)

　　Recently, sth./the problem of…h(huán)as been brought to popular attention/ has become the focus of public concern…（eg. Recently, the problem of unemployment has been brought to such popular attention that governments worldwide are committed to finding useful solutions.）

　　In the past few years，there has been a boom/sharp growth/decline in…（eg. In the past ten years, there has been a sharp decline in the number of species.）

　　Nowadaysmore/most important/dangerous for our society is…（eg. Nowadays, most dangerous for our society is the tendency to take advantage of each other in political circles.）

　　Now there is a growing awareness that+同位語從句...

　　It is time we explore the truth of ...

　　進(jìn)一步提出觀點：

　　…of them hold the opinion that ….（不同觀點）

　　…of them are in favor of the idea that…（不同觀點）

　　People who are for/against the idea think …（不同觀點）

　　However, each coin has two sides.（不同觀點）

　　Different from those…., …people think ….（不同觀點）

　　On the other hand, … people object that（有些人反對道…）.（不同觀點）

　　A is but one of the many effects. Another is ...

　　Besides, other reasons are...

　　提出假想例子的方式：

　　Suppose that...

　　Just imagine what would be like if...

　　It is reasonable to expect...

　　It is not surprising that...

　　舉普通例子：

　　For example(instance),...

　　... such as A,B,C and so on (so forth)

　　We can take something for example.

　　A particular example for this is...

　　引用：

　　One of the greatest early writers said ...

　　"Knowledge is power", such is the remark of ...

　　As somebody once put it, “…”

　　"...". How often we hear such words like these.

　　提出原因：

　　There are many reasons for ...

　　Why .... ? For one thing,... ; for another thing,…

　　The answer to this problem involves many factors.

　　Most people would agree that...

　　Some people may neglect that in fact...

　　Others suggest that...

　　Part of the explanation is...

　　進(jìn)行對比：

　　The advantages for A outweigh the disadvantages of...

　　Although A enjoys a distinct advantage ...

　　Indeed , A has more advantages than B when sth is concerned.

　　A maybe ... , but it has the disadvantage that...

　　承上啟下：

　　To understand the truth of ..., it is also important to see...

　　A study of ... will make this point clear

　　讓步：

　　Certainly, B has its own advantages, such as...

　　I do not deny that A has its own merits.

　　結(jié)尾：

　　From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...

　　In summary, it is wiser of somebody to do something

　　In short...

　　注（圖表型）

　　According to the information given in the table/graph, we can find that...

　　As can be seen from the table/graph/figure, there is an obvious and rapid increase /decrease/decline/favorable (an unfavorable) change in...

　　As we can see from the table/graph/form /figure above, great changes have taken place in... over the period of time from...（年份）to（年份）

　　The table/graph shows that there is an) declining/increasing trend of ...from...（年份）to（年份）

　　Anyone who takes a closer look at the data in the table/graph can be surprised to find that

　　方法一使用非謂語動詞使句子簡潔高檔

　　方法二巧用倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)增強句子的表現(xiàn)力

　　方法三嘗試多樣化表達(dá)方式，包括無靈主語

　　1感嘆句

　　1) How happy I was when I received your letter.

　　2What a kind boy he is!

　　3) How disappointed he was!

　　2. 強調(diào)句

　　It was this young boy that helped the old granny.

　　3倒裝句

　　1) Only in this way can you solve this problem.

　　2) There comes the police car.

　　3) Hardly had they got to the station when they met the young man.

　　4省略句

　　They read while walking or riding on a bus.

　　5with短語

　　I saw a young lady walking slowly in the streetwith a handbag in her hand.

　　6. 定語從句，特別是高級定語從句，以及非限制性定語從句。

　　In my opinion, Internet bars should be places where we can find much useful information.

　　7各種名詞性從句，包括主語從句，賓語從句，表語從句，同位語從句。

　　That’s what I should do.

　　8各種狀語從句

　　On arriving at the airport, Lien Chan and his wife…

　　No sooner had Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport than they were …

　　Hardly had Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport when they were …

　　提分秘籍

　　十句作文法是有關(guān)專家總結(jié)出來的一種高分作文方法，考生在經(jīng)過短期訓(xùn)練之后便可較大幅度地提高寫作水平。其基本模式為：

　　第一段為開頭，包括兩句。第一句為主題句，點明全文主題；第二句為擴展句，進(jìn)一步說明和支持主題句。兩者關(guān)系也可倒過來，由第一句說明情況，第二句點明主題。

　　第二段為正文，共七句。第三句為主題句，提出本段的主題，它應(yīng)與第一段的主題相關(guān)或一致。第四至八句為擴展句（支撐句），說明和支持本段的主題。第九句為照應(yīng)句，用來回扣第二段的開頭。句與句之間要注意好過渡，以使段落邏輯合理，結(jié)構(gòu)得當(dāng)。

　　第三段為結(jié)尾，簡化為一句，也是全文的總結(jié)句， 它將前面的內(nèi)容總結(jié)為一個結(jié)果，表明自己的論點。

　　注意

　　要提高語言表達(dá)的檔次，在句式運用上就不能一味地使用簡單句和陳述句，而應(yīng)該根據(jù)實際情況靈活運用所學(xué)的各種句式。豐富的句式有助于考生在高考中出類拔萃，贏得高分。另外，十句和三段式書面表達(dá)方法只是一種簡單實用的形式，可以有很多的變通。例如：每一段的句子完全可以根據(jù)情況和需要進(jìn)行調(diào)整，最后一段的句子完全沒必要只有一句話，當(dāng)然，又臭又長的結(jié)尾和云里霧里的開頭都是讓人討厭和出力不討好的事情。

　　過渡詞

　　要學(xué)會使用過渡詞。過渡詞猶如“橋梁”和“粘合劑 ”。恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂眠^渡詞可避免結(jié)構(gòu)松散，層次分明，表意不清等弊端，使文章條理清楚，文字連貫流暢。常用的過渡詞有：

　　遞進(jìn)型：also, besides, what’s more, moreover, furthermore, in addition, even, what’s worse, worse still, to make matters/things worse, not only …but also等

　　解釋型：that is (to say), in other words, or, in fact, in reality, as a matter of fact等

　　轉(zhuǎn)折型：however, but, yet, nevertheless, instead, on the contrary, on the other hand等

　　列舉型：firstly…secondly…finally, on the one hand, on the other hand, for one thing, for another (thing)等

　　舉例型：for example, for instance, such as, that is, like, take… for example等

　　因果型：because (of), since, now that, thanks to, due to; thus, therefore, as a result (consequence),so… that,

　　so that等

　　讓步型：though, although, in spite of, despite, even though, even if等

　　順序型：first…next…and then…finally, first…then…after that…finally等

　　并列型：and, both…and, or, either…or, as well as等

　　時間型：afterwards, soon, later, the moment/ immediately/ , hardly…when, no sooner…than, be about to do something when… be on the point of doing something when…等

　　總結(jié)型：in a/one word, to sum up, in short, on the whole, in conclusion, every coins has two sides

　　見解型：as for me，in my opinion, personally speaking, as far as I am concerned，I’m sure等

　　條件型：if, as long as, so long as, on condition that , unless等

　　開頭句

　　論述的展開提出觀點：

　　No one would deny that…

　　Now it is widely believed that…

　　When it comes to…, some think…

　　There is a public debate today that...

　　A is a common way of…, but is it a wise one?

　　Recently the problem has been brought into focus that+同位語從句

　　Different people hold different opinions.

　　Opinions are divided.

　　People have taken/adopted different attitudes towards…

　　With the rapid improvement in…/growing awareness of…, more and more…(e.g. With the rapid improvement in building industry, more and more structures are being erected to set the people‘s minds at ease.)

　　Recently, sth./the problem of…h(huán)as been brought to popular attention/ has become the focus of public concern…（eg. Recently, the problem of unemployment has been brought to such popular attention that governments worldwide are committed to finding useful solutions.）

　　In the past few years，there has been a boom/sharp growth/decline in…（eg. In the past ten years, there has been a sharp decline in the number of species.）

　　Nowadaysmore/most important/dangerous for our society is…（eg. Nowadays, most dangerous for our society is the tendency to take advantage of each other in political circles.）

　　Now there is a growing awareness that+同位語從句...

　　It is time we explore the truth of ...

　　進(jìn)一步提出觀點：

　　…of them hold the opinion that ….（不同觀點）

　　…of them are in favor of the idea that…（不同觀點）

　　People who are for/against the idea think …（不同觀點）

　　However, each coin has two sides.（不同觀點）

　　Different from those…., …people think ….（不同觀點）

　　On the other hand, … people object that（有些人反對道…）.（不同觀點）

　　A is but one of the many effects. Another is ...

　　Besides, other reasons are...

　　提出假想例子的方式：

　　Suppose that...

　　Just imagine what would be like if...

　　It is reasonable to expect...

　　It is not surprising that...

　　舉普通例子：

　　For example(instance),...

　　... such as A,B,C and so on (so forth)

　　We can take something for example.

　　A particular example for this is...

　　引用：

　　One of the greatest early writers said ...

　　"Knowledge is power", such is the remark of ...

　　As somebody once put it, “…”

　　"...". How often we hear such words like these.

　　提出原因：

　　There are many reasons for ...

　　Why .... ? For one thing,... ; for another thing,…

　　The answer to this problem involves many factors.

　　Most people would agree that...

　　Some people may neglect that in fact...

　　Others suggest that...

　　Part of the explanation is...

　　進(jìn)行對比：

　　The advantages for A outweigh the disadvantages of...

　　Although A enjoys a distinct advantage ...

　　Indeed , A has more advantages than B when sth is concerned.

　　A maybe ... , but it has the disadvantage that...

　　承上啟下：

　　To understand the truth of ..., it is also important to see...

　　A study of ... will make this point clear

　　讓步：

　　Certainly, B has its own advantages, such as...

　　I do not deny that A has its own merits.

　　結(jié)尾：

　　From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...

　　In summary, it is wiser of somebody to do something

　　In short...

　　注（圖表型）

　　According to the information given in the table/graph, we can find that...

　　As can be seen from the table/graph/figure, there is an obvious and rapid increase /decrease/decline/favorable (an unfavorable) change in...

　　As we can see from the table/graph/form /figure above, great changes have taken place in... over the period of time from...（年份）to（年份）

　　The table/graph shows that there is an) declining/increasing trend of ...from...（年份）to（年份）

　　Anyone who takes a closer look at the data in the table/graph can be surprised to find that

　　方法一使用非謂語動詞使句子簡潔高檔

　　方法二巧用倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)增強句子的表現(xiàn)力

　　方法三嘗試多樣化表達(dá)方式，包括無靈主語

　　1感嘆句

　　1) How happy I was when I received your letter.

　　2What a kind boy he is!

　　3) How disappointed he was!

　　2. 強調(diào)句

　　It was this young boy that helped the old granny.

　　3倒裝句

　　1) Only in this way can you solve this problem.

　　2) There comes the police car.

　　3) Hardly had they got to the station when they met the young man.

　　4省略句

　　They read while walking or riding on a bus.

　　5with短語

　　I saw a young lady walking slowly in the streetwith a handbag in her hand.

　　6. 定語從句，特別是高級定語從句，以及非限制性定語從句。

　　In my opinion, Internet bars should be places where we can find much useful information.

　　7各種名詞性從句，包括主語從句，賓語從句，表語從句，同位語從句。

　　That’s what I should do.

　　8各種狀語從句

　　On arriving at the airport, Lien Chan and his wife…

　　No sooner had Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport than they were …

　　Hardly had Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport when they were …