2024屆高考英語一輪循環(huán)寫作周周練：第15周 提綱作文（新人教版含解析）
第十五周 提綱作文
[學審題謀篇]
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(2024·濰坊市高考模擬)假定你是李華，正在新西蘭學習。你計劃寒假期間去當?shù)芈眯校堄糜⑽膶懸环鈋-mail向旅行社詢問相關(guān)的旅行信息。要點如下：
1．旅行信息(如景點等)；2.當?shù)靥厣?如食品等)；3.注意事項。
注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；
2．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；
3．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
Dear Sir or Madam，
I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student, studying in New Zealand. I’m writing to
Sincerely Yours，
Li Hua
1．審題
提綱作文的關(guān)鍵就是審好題，審題時應做到三定：①定體裁；②定人稱；③定時態(tài)。
如本文為書信，是高考經(jīng)常考查的類型，屬于應用文；人稱以第一人稱為主；時態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時。
2．謀篇
提綱作文雖然有簡要的提綱，但只是對文章的提示和概括，我們在謀篇時要仔細研讀題目信息，對提綱進行歸納整合，并適度拓展。
如本文首先要作自我介紹，并說明寫信的目的；然后向旅行社詳細詢問相關(guān)的旅行信息；最后希望對方能早日答復。
[學增分亮點]
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[滿分范文]
Dear Sir or Madam，
①I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student, studying in New Zealand. ②I’m writing to ask for information about your agency’s New Zealand’s travel for the coming winter vacation.
③My friend and I plan to travel in the country. ④Could you tell me the departure time and traveling routes? ⑤As we know, New Zealand is famous for its beautiful scenery and places of interest and I want to know more details about these. ⑥Besides, I am interested in the local food there. ⑦How much do I have to pay for the travel? ⑧At length, are there other things I should be aware of?
⑨I would be grateful to receive a reply at your earliest convenience.
Sincerely Yours，
Li Hua
[滿分緣由]
1．結(jié)構(gòu)布局
本文可分為三段：
第一段：首先作自我介紹，并說明寫信的目的是詢問在新西蘭旅行的信息；
第二段：向旅行社詳細詢問相關(guān)的旅行信息，如旅游景點和當?shù)靥厣称返龋?/p>
第三段：希望對方早日回信。
2．亮點詞匯
ask for, be famous for, places of interest, be interested in, at length, grateful, at one’s earliest convenience
3．亮點句式
第①句包含現(xiàn)在分詞短語作定語；
第⑤句包含as引導的定語從句；
第⑧句包含定語從句，且引導詞that省略。
[句式改寫]
1．用it作形式主語改寫句⑤
It_is_known_to_us_all_that_New_Zealand_is_famous_for_its_beautiful_scenery_and_places_of_interest_and_I_want_to_know_more_details_about_these.
2．用I’d appreciate it if ...改寫句⑨
I’d_appreciate_it_if_you_can_give_me_a_reply_at_your_earliest_convenience.
[寫滿分作文]
(2024·洛陽高三一模)假定你是李華，你的美國朋友Jack來信說，他暑假后將到北京大學留學。請你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容給他寫一封回信，告知相關(guān)情況。
1．簡單介紹北京大學；
2．生活便利，居民友善；
3．留學期間愿意提供任何幫助。
注意：詞數(shù)100左右；開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
[要求]
請用定語從句、分詞短語、被動語態(tài)、不定式、狀語從句、it作形式主語、省略完成作文。
Dear Jack，
I glad to know that you will come to China for further study. Now let me tell you what you are concerned with.
I’m looking forward to meeting you in Beijing.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
參考范文：
Dear Jack,
I’m glad to know that you will come to China for further study. Now let me tell you what you are concerned with.
As is known to us, Beijing University is one of the top universities in China, which is famous for its excellent teaching in art and culture. Studying there, you are sure to get improved in every aspect. This is the first time for you to live in a foreign country alone, but yon don’t need to worry about the life there, because it is located in the business center of Beijing. Therefore, it is extremely convenient for you to live there. Besides, most people in Beijing are both kind and hospitable to foreigners.
I’d like to help you find a proper host family nearby the university if necessary.
I’m looking forward to meeting you in Beijing.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
第十五周 提綱作文
[學審題謀篇]
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(2024·濰坊市高考模擬)假定你是李華，正在新西蘭學習。你計劃寒假期間去當?shù)芈眯校堄糜⑽膶懸环鈋-mail向旅行社詢問相關(guān)的旅行信息。要點如下：
1．旅行信息(如景點等)；2.當?shù)靥厣?如食品等)；3.注意事項。
注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；
2．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；
3．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
Dear Sir or Madam，
I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student, studying in New Zealand. I’m writing to
Sincerely Yours，
Li Hua
1．審題
提綱作文的關(guān)鍵就是審好題，審題時應做到三定：①定體裁；②定人稱；③定時態(tài)。
如本文為書信，是高考經(jīng)常考查的類型，屬于應用文；人稱以第一人稱為主；時態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時。
2．謀篇
提綱作文雖然有簡要的提綱，但只是對文章的提示和概括，我們在謀篇時要仔細研讀題目信息，對提綱進行歸納整合，并適度拓展。
如本文首先要作自我介紹，并說明寫信的目的；然后向旅行社詳細詢問相關(guān)的旅行信息；最后希望對方能早日答復。
[學增分亮點]
—————————————————————————————————————
[滿分范文]
Dear Sir or Madam，
①I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student, studying in New Zealand. ②I’m writing to ask for information about your agency’s New Zealand’s travel for the coming winter vacation.
③My friend and I plan to travel in the country. ④Could you tell me the departure time and traveling routes? ⑤As we know, New Zealand is famous for its beautiful scenery and places of interest and I want to know more details about these. ⑥Besides, I am interested in the local food there. ⑦How much do I have to pay for the travel? ⑧At length, are there other things I should be aware of?
⑨I would be grateful to receive a reply at your earliest convenience.
Sincerely Yours，
Li Hua
[滿分緣由]
1．結(jié)構(gòu)布局
本文可分為三段：
第一段：首先作自我介紹，并說明寫信的目的是詢問在新西蘭旅行的信息；
第二段：向旅行社詳細詢問相關(guān)的旅行信息，如旅游景點和當?shù)靥厣称返龋?/p>
第三段：希望對方早日回信。
2．亮點詞匯
ask for, be famous for, places of interest, be interested in, at length, grateful, at one’s earliest convenience
3．亮點句式
第①句包含現(xiàn)在分詞短語作定語；
第⑤句包含as引導的定語從句；
第⑧句包含定語從句，且引導詞that省略。
[句式改寫]
1．用it作形式主語改寫句⑤
It_is_known_to_us_all_that_New_Zealand_is_famous_for_its_beautiful_scenery_and_places_of_interest_and_I_want_to_know_more_details_about_these.
2．用I’d appreciate it if ...改寫句⑨
I’d_appreciate_it_if_you_can_give_me_a_reply_at_your_earliest_convenience.
[寫滿分作文]
(2024·洛陽高三一模)假定你是李華，你的美國朋友Jack來信說，他暑假后將到北京大學留學。請你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容給他寫一封回信，告知相關(guān)情況。
1．簡單介紹北京大學；
2．生活便利，居民友善；
3．留學期間愿意提供任何幫助。
注意：詞數(shù)100左右；開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
[要求]
請用定語從句、分詞短語、被動語態(tài)、不定式、狀語從句、it作形式主語、省略完成作文。
Dear Jack，
I glad to know that you will come to China for further study. Now let me tell you what you are concerned with.
I’m looking forward to meeting you in Beijing.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
參考范文：
Dear Jack,
I’m glad to know that you will come to China for further study. Now let me tell you what you are concerned with.
As is known to us, Beijing University is one of the top universities in China, which is famous for its excellent teaching in art and culture. Studying there, you are sure to get improved in every aspect. This is the first time for you to live in a foreign country alone, but yon don’t need to worry about the life there, because it is located in the business center of Beijing. Therefore, it is extremely convenient for you to live there. Besides, most people in Beijing are both kind and hospitable to foreigners.
I’d like to help you find a proper host family nearby the university if necessary.
I’m looking forward to meeting you in Beijing.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
