2023中考英語作文：現代生活

05 現代生活篇（一）根據相關研究預測，如果缺乏有效干預措施，到 2025 年，中國將有 5000 萬超重兒童，居世界首位。假如你是校園網的一名小記者，針對這一問題，請根據下面的要點提示，寫一篇英語短文。

提示：
1. 我國青少年肥胖問題日益嚴重；

2. 吃太多的高脂肪食品和不運動”是導致青 少年肥胖的主要原因；

3. 建議青少年健康飲食，多運動，養成良好的 生活習慣。

要求：
寫作內容必須包含以上提示的所有內容，可以適當發揮；

80 詞左右，文章開頭已經給出，不計入總詞 數。

A study has predicted that over 50 million children will be overweight in China by 2025 if any thing isn’t done.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【滿分范文】A study has predicted that over 50 million children will be overweight in China by 2025 if anything isn＇t done. In China, the problem is becoming more and more serious because most overweight children like eating fatty food and they hardly exercise.How should we solve the problem? Firstly, children must have healthy eating habits. They should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat and junk food. Secondly, they should exercise often. It＇ll make them healthy and feel good. Finally, keep some good living habits such as getting up early and going to bed early.In a word, healthy eating, proper exercise and good living habits can keep children from getting fatter.【寫作指導】健康是與我們息息相關的話題，同學們可以選擇自身作為切入點，詳細講述為自己制定的運動計劃。

（二）假如你是李華,給你在英國朋友Jack寫一封電子郵件, 告知其目前新型冠狀病毒肺炎的形勢, 并告訴他一些防御措施，請他注意防護。要點如下:1 我們的城市對于控制疫情已經取得較大的成功。

2注意防護，如減少外出，帶口罩外出，勤洗手等。

3表達戰勝疫情的信心。

注意:1、可適當增加細節, 使行文連貫;2、80-100詞，開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。

參考詞匯：novel coronavirus（新型冠狀病毒）口罩：mask.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【滿分范文】Dear Jack,How is everything going? Novel coronavirus has spread throughout the world .Our city has achieved great success in controlling it. I have some advice for you on how to prevent it. The most important thing is to stay at home, try not to get together with your family and friends. Second, wash your hands often with soap and water. It is a useful way to keep you away from the virus. Third, when you have to go out, you must wear a mask to cover your mouth and nose, and learn how to put it on, take it off and throw it away correctly .Remember, if you have a fever or a cough, you had better go to a hospital , and let a doctor give you further examination. All of these are helpful to keep you safe.We believe winter will finally pass, and spring is sure to come. We will go back to school as soon as possible.Hope everything goes well with you.Yours,Li Hua【解析】1.題干解讀：本篇材料作文要求以李華的身份，用第一人稱給在英國朋友Jack寫一封電子郵件，告知其目前新型冠狀病毒肺炎的形勢，并告訴他一些防御措施，書寫時要注意用全題干所給提示要點，文句通順，內容完整。

2.例文點評：本例文層次分明，第一層講述新型冠狀病毒已經傳遍全球，第二層講述防范措施，第三層展望戰勝疫情的信心；
短文陳述的中心突出，層次之間有機聯系。

3.高分亮點：本篇例文運用的短語spread throughout the world；
achieve great success in；

have some advice for you on ；
keep you away from；
文中用不定式的不同句式The most important thing is to stay at home；
It is a useful way to keep you away from the virus；
try not to get together with your family and friends；
All of these are helpful to keep you safe；
多種復合句條件狀語從句if you have a fever or a cough, you had better go to a hospital ；
賓語從句We believe winter will finally pass, and spring is sure to come.【點睛】本篇是材料作文，書寫前要認真閱讀題干，了解題干的要求，確定中心話題，依據題干要求，分好短文的層次，確定層次的內容，使短文看起來邏輯清晰；
建議使用表順序的副詞或短語表達有關防御措施，使短文更有條理。

（三）假如你是陽光中學的李華，即將要畢業的你，對學習和生活了三年的母校充滿了眷戀和感恩，想在當地報刊上發表一篇英語文章描述自己的母校。請根據以下提示，寫一篇短文。

學校①優美的學習環境。

②現代化的操場。

同學①相互學習，相互幫助。

②積極參加課外活動，提高能力。

老師①對我們的一切要求嚴格。

②......(自擬一點）感想......(自擬兩點）要求：
1. 文中不得出現真實姓名、校名。

2. 不要逐字翻譯，可適當發揮。“……”部分需自擬。

3. 詞數90個左右。

My Mother SchoolI will graduate from Yang Guang Middle School. I have enjoyed a lot during the past three years.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【滿分范文】I will graduate from Yang Guang Middle School. I have enjoyed a lot during the past three years. It’s a very beautiful school which provides us with a good environment to study. There is a modern playground in our school and we often play basketball there.Besides that, we often learn from each other and help each other in our daily life. We take an active part in after-school activities and it improves our abilities. The teachers are strict with us, but they are patient enough to explain everything to us. When something worries me, I often ask my teacher for help. I’m proud I can study in this school, and I’ll remember my mother school forever.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇該材料作文，寫一寫自己對三年來母校的感想。本題所給材料較為詳細。寫作中注意從學校，老師和同學們三個方面進行敘述，并表達自己的感想。根據材料內容可知本文時態人稱問題比較復雜，注意時態與時間狀語的搭配，注意主謂一致問題。寫作中，應注意描述的全面性；
語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣。

考點：提綱類作文點評：此類作為首先要做的就是認真閱讀材料，不能跑題偏題。寫作中注意一些基礎的寫作常識，不犯低級錯誤。只要平時積累足夠，就一定能獲得滿意的分數。另外為了應付考試，可以有選擇的背誦一些范文，這樣應考時就會有法可依。

（四）根據文字提示,請你以“ How to Keep Safe in School”為話題,寫一篇80-100詞的英語短文,談談你的看法要點:1.描述一件發生在你身上或你看到的發生在校園的意外事件(經過與結果2.提出避免這種校園意外的建議(至少兩條);3.呼吁同學們注意校園安全要求:1.文中不得出現真實的校名和姓名;2.短文開頭已給出,不計入總詞數提示詞匯: not run in the hall ways, stop… from doing, pay attention toHow to Keep Safe in SchoolDo you know that our school life could be dangerous if we are not careful enough? For example___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【滿分范文】How to Keep Safe in SchoolDo you know that our school life could be dangerous if we are not careful enough?For example, one day, two students ran after each other in the hallway. Suddenly, one of them fell down and hurt his leg because of the wet floor. Therefore, he had to stay inhospital for several days. So I think students should walk and do not run in the hallways. And the teachers had better keep one eye on the students after class and stop them from running. At last, I hope all the students should pay attention to their safety in school.【解析】題干解讀：這是一篇給材料作文。主要寫三個方面的內容：描述一件發生在校園里的意外事件，要寫明經過和結果，用一般過去時態；
提出至少兩條避免意外發生的建議，用一般現在時；
最后要呼吁同學們注意校園安全。同時要注意提示詞匯的使用。

例文點評：這篇短文內容清晰完整語言簡潔正確。首先舉例描述發生在校園里的意外事件，有過程有結果，接著用I think引入自己的建議，最后用I hope+從句的方式呼吁學生們要注意校園安全。

高分亮點：短語：ran after each other ；
because of；
fell down；
keep one eye on；
stop them from running；
pay attention to。

句型：had better do sth最好做某事；
I hope +從句。

（五）昨天你班召開了一次“告別陋習，走上文明”的主題班會。會上老師讓你們談談身邊同學的變化。請你根據表格里的內容寫一篇有關王明同學的文章。

過去的表現現在的表現經常和同學打架(fight)和同學相處融洽( be good with)花很多時間玩電腦游戲(spend time doing)積極 (active)參加各項活動 (activity)經常吃垃圾食品( junk food)健康的生活習慣( living habits)在課堂上吃東西，睡覺(either...or...)認真聽課，按時完成(finish)作業考試不及格(fail)各門學科取得好成績，尤其 ( especially)數學注意:1文章必須包括所有內容要點，可適當發揮使短文的意思連貫語句通順。

2不得出現真實的人名，校名和地名。字數80左右，(文章的開頭已給出，不計入總字數)Wang Ming is my classmate. He had made great progress this term. In the past,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【滿分范文】Wang Ming is my classmate. He had made great progress this term. In the past, he always fought with others. He used to spend much time playing computer games. And he often ate junk food. In class he either ate or slept. He always failed the exam.But now he changed a lot. He can be good with other students. He take an active part in all kinds of activities, and becomes very outgoing .He has healthy eating habits. Also he listens to the teachers carefully in class and finishes his homework on time. So he gets good grades in all subjects, especially math. Now we all like him.【解析】題干解讀：本文屬于材料作文，根據你班召的主題班會“告別陋習，走上文明”的主題班會。談談你身邊同學的變化。這篇文中涉及到了過去和現在的不同變化。文中需要用到一般過去時和一般現在時態。

2.例文點評：這是一篇優秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規定的任務。本文是兩段式，第一段介紹了過去的情況，第二段是現在的變化。語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。

3.高分亮點：
短語：make great progress；
in the past；
fight with；
either …or…；
take an active part in；
healthy eating habits。

句型：He used to spend much time playing computer games（used to do 的句型）；
He take an active part in all kinds of activities, and becomes very outgoing（六）初三學生Sandy面臨中考，面對父母和老師的期望及每天堆成山的作業感到非常苦惱，昨天因為看了一小時的電視和媽媽吵架，最后摔門而去。于是她寫信給老師傾訴煩惱，請你根據下列提示以老師Nancy的身份用英語給她寫一封回信。

提示：
1．如何舒緩目前的壓力；

2．如何安排好每天的學習和休息；

3．如何處理與父母的關系。

注意：
1．必須包括要點中所有提示內容，并作適當發揮；

2．文中不得出現你的真實姓名和學校名稱；

3．表達清楚，語句通順，意思連貫，書寫規范；

4．詞數不少于90詞（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數）。

Dear Sandy，I’m really glad that you can share your problems and feelings with me． Here is my advice．_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，Nancy【滿分范文】Dear Sandy，I’m really glad that you can share your problems and feelings with me． Here is my advice．（點題）First， it’s a good choice to take up a hobby to help you relax and reduce your pressure．【高分句型一】Second， you can make plans for your everyday life． After you study for about two hours， you can take a walk outside and try to relax． Besides， don’t stay up late． It’s not good for your health．Third， never argue with your parents． You should learn to understand them and spend some time communicating with them． Discuss your problems with them and tell them your ideas． They will help you find better ways to solve them．（建議）In a word， you will have a happier life with less pressure as long as you study hard and often talk with your parents．【高分句型二】（總結全文）Yours，Nancy（七）九年級的學習生活繁忙中有困惑、淚水，也有進步、喜悅．請根據下面提示，以“Our School Life in Grade Nine為題寫一篇詞數為80左右的短文，介紹九年級的學校生活，并提出希望和建議．提示：
1． 在學校：老師認真負責，充滿愛心；
學生：……（至少發揮兩點）2． 周末作業：作業多，舍棄愛好；
周末活動：鍛煉、電視愿望：……（發揮一到兩點）要求：1． 短文須包括所有提示要點，可適當發揮；

2． 短文中不要出現真實的地名、校名和人名；

3． 詞數80個左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數）．參考詞匯：patient， carefully， actively， stressed緊張的____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【滿分范文】Our School Life in Grade NineIt is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student．【高分句型一】 Here is what our school life is like now．（點題）At school, all of our teachers work very hard．Most of them are kind﹣hearted and patient enough to help us with all kinds of problems．As for students， in class we listen to the teacher carefully and think actively． After class，we are busy doing our homework． We all work hard to improve ourselves．On weekends, we spend much time doing homework， so we can’t spare time for our hobbies any more．I feel a little stressed，so I try to play basketball or watch TV to get relaxed．I hope to work hard to make my dream come true． I also wish my classmates healthy and happy every day．（介紹學校生活）No pains， no gains．The more carefully we plan our day， the more colorful our school life will be．【高分句型二】（總結全文）（八）近年來，我國校園欺凌事件屢有發生，而遭受校園欺凌的學生容易情緒抑郁、焦慮，不敢去學校，甚至會出現心理問題等嚴重后果．請以“My opinions about school bullying為題“，寫一篇英語短文，談談你的看法．提示：
1．What do you think of school bullying？2．What will you do if you are bullied or you see somebody else being bullied？要求：
1．所給提示信息應全部包括，可適當發揮，以使行文連貫；

2.80 詞以上．參考詞匯：心理問題 mental health problems．My opinions about school bullying____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【滿分范文】My opinions about school bullyingSchool bullying is a big problem that has got more and more attention in society． Being bullied can make students feel scared or upset． Some students are afraid of going to school． School bullying can even lead to more serious mental health problems． So how should we stop school bullying？（我對校園欺凌的看法）If I see somebody being bullied or I am bullied， I will tell the teachers or my parents at once．【高分句型一】 It is not a good idea to do any bad things to the bullies on my own．【高分句型二】（如果被欺負，我會怎么做）（九）初中生活即將結束，這三年一定給你留下很多美好的回憶．英語俱樂部征文要求寫篇110詞左右文章描述你難忘的校園生活、師生情或同學情．以及在臨別之際，對他們說的感激和祝福的話．文中不得出現真實的人名和校名． 【滿分范文】How time flies!Our junior high school days are coming to an end ，andI＇d like to say a lot to you all who have helped me and stayed with me．【高分句型一】（點題）Firstly，I＇d like to thank my great teachers．They teach me not only how to learn but also how to be a man．Though they look strict and serious，they are always kind to me．（感謝老師） Secondly，I want to thank my friendly classmates．As long as I have trouble，they are always around me．I miss the happy days when we stay with each other．I love all of you．（感謝同學）Finally，I＇m going to thank my parents．They always look after me very well to keep me healthy．And they often encourage me to work hard at school．【高分句型二】（感謝父母）（十）親愛的同學，假如你是 Alex， 初中生活即將結束，你所向往的高中生活即將來臨．由于疫情（epidemic situation） 原因，你將代表（represent） 初三畢業生，做一個網絡直播演講．請你根據以下要點，用英語寫一篇演講稿．（1）對初中三年學習生活的總結（至少三個方面）（2）對老師、同學及父母的感謝，并簡要說明原因（3）談談你對未來的夢想和肩負的社會責任，以及你得如何去實現要求：1．文章語句通順，句式多樣．可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫．2．開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數．3．文中不得出現真實姓名、學校和班級．4．詞數：100詞左右．Dear ladies and gentlemen， That＇s all for my speech． Thank you for your attention!【滿分范文】Dear ladies and gentlemen，It＇s my honor to make a speech at the graduating ceremony．【高分句型一】（點題）It has been three years since we came to the beautiful school．Our school is very beautiful．We have colourful activities every term．Our teachers always try to make their lessons lively and interesting．【高分句型二】We have learned a lot and made great progress during the last three years．（對初中三年學習生活的總結）We should thank our teachers，our parents and our classmates．The first group is my classmates．We＇ve worked hard together and we＇ve even shared some difficult times together．The second group is our parents．I thank you for making a home where I feel both safe and relaxed．I also thank you for your help with my homework．The third group is our teachers．We can never pay you back for your kindness，your patience，and gift of knowledge which you have offered us．（對老師、同學、父母的感謝以及原因）In the future， I want to be a teacher to help more people in need．I will study hard and realize this dream as soon as possible．（未來夢想以及如何實現）That＇s all for my speech． Thank you for your attention!（十一）“你養我長大，我陪你變老．“父母親一直在為我們的成長默默付出，成長要學會感受愛、回報愛．今天你即將畢業是向父母表達感激的好機會．請根據以下所給要點，寫一篇英語短文．要點：
（1）給我生命，一直照顧我成長；

（2）努力工作，為我提供良好的生活和教育條件；

（3）擁有愛心，教我學會……；

（4）今天，我要為你們……（自主發揮，至少兩點）．注意事項：
（1）詞數80左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數；

（2）文中不得出現真實的地名、校名、人名等信息．You bring me up. I will be with you in your life. You are important persons in the process of my growth. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【滿分范文】You bring me up. I will be with you in your life. You are important persons in the process of my growth．You give me life and take care of me all the time．（給我生命，一直照顧我成長） When I have problems with my study and life，you are always patient enough to help me and encourage me． 【高分句型一】 In order to let me live a pleasant life and receive good education，you always work hard from morning till night． （努力工作，為我提供良好的生活和教育條件）Everyone knows you are the persons full oflove．You are ready to help people in need．It is you who teach me to be a kind person．【高分句型二】（擁有愛心，教我做慈愛的人）Dad and mum，today I＇ll cook dinner for you．I＇ll go for a walk with you after dinner．（今天要為父母做的兩件事）I hope you will be happy and healthy forever!【名師點評】【高分句型一】When I have problems with my study and life，you are always patient enough to help me and encourage me．當我的學習和生活有問題時，你總是耐心地幫助我，鼓勵我．when當……時候，引導時間狀語從句，adj +enough +to do sth 足夠地……可以做某事，【高分句型二】It is you who teach me to be a kind person．是你教會我做一個善良的人．本句使用了強調句It is +被強調部分+that/who …（十二）初中生活馬上就要結束了，三年的初中生活一定給你留下了很多揮之不去的回憶。請你給大家講一個最值得你回憶的故事。包括時間、人物、事情經過和事后你的感想 (請不要寫出真實的學校名稱以及真實姓名)。

提示詞語：three years；
memories；
one of；
one day；
think；
happy / sorry______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【滿分范文】How time flies! I have studied in my school for three years. And I will graduate from middle school in a month. I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you. I had so many memories in three years＇ life. One of them impressed me very much. I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn＇t do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then, she has kept helping me. Little by little, I＇ve become interested in English and I＇m good at it. I think I am so lucky to become one of her students. I＇ve learned a lot from her. I will try to help others when they are in trouble. I think it is a happy thing to help others.（十三）假如你是Han Mei，下面是一封你的筆友Alice給你發來的e-mail，請你根據e-mail 的內容給她寫一封回信，與她交流看法，并幫她排憂解難。

提示詞語：listen to；
mother＇s love；
care about；
communicate with；
get along with；
smile寫作要求：
語句通順，書寫工整；

可用所給提示詞語，也可以適當發揮；

詞數在60-80左右。

Dear Han Mei,I＇m afraid I＇ve got a big problem recently. My mother talks too much to me. She always tells me, “Be careful while crossing the street.““Put on more clothes.”“Did you do a good job at school?“ And so on. I＇m annoyed (煩惱). What shall I do? Yours，Alice________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【滿分范文】Dear Alice,As a teenager, I met the same problem as you. But now I can get along better with my mother. Here are some ideas for you.Your mother talks much, because she cares about you. Maybe it＇s not a good way, but it shows your mother＇s love. So I think you should listen to her. If your opinions are different from your mother＇s you can communicate with her, and tell her what you are thinking about. If your mother doesn＇t take your advice, just keep silent and give her a smile.I hope what I say here can help you a lot.YoursHan Mei