2024屆高考英語一輪復習寫作指導課件：第2講 并列句在寫作中的應用（牛津譯林版）
一、魔法導航 并列句是由并列連詞連接兩個分句而組成的句子,其基本結構是:簡單句+并列 連詞+簡單句。并列句中的前后兩個分句根據邏輯關系可分為以下幾種: 1.表并列或遞進:常用連詞是and;常用句型有not only...but also(不僅……而且 ……),not...but...(不是……而是……),be about to do...when...(正要做某事,就在 這時/那時……)。 ?典句引領 Work hard and you will succeed one day.
努力工作,早晚有一天你會成功的。 Tom was about to close the window when his attention was caught by a bird.
湯姆正要關上窗戶,就在那時一只鳥引起了他的注意。 ——齊頭并進,抑揚頓挫 ?雕詞琢句 If you are able to come with us, please let us know????(我們將會等你) at the school gate at 9 in the morning. (2024課標全國Ⅱ) ?答案 and we'll wait for you 2.表轉折:常用的連詞是but和yet。 ?典句引領 This math problem was very difficult, but I managed to solve it. 這道數學題很難,但是我設法把它解決了。 ?雕詞琢句 我想去博物館,但是絕大部分同學想去野餐。(2024浙江) ?
??? ?答案 I would love to go to a museum, but most of my classmates wanted to go
for a picnic. 3.表選擇:常用的連詞是or。 ?典句引領 Hurry up, or you'll be late for the meeting. 快點,否則你開會會遲到的。 ?雕詞琢句 (1)Seize the opportunity, ????(否則你會后悔的). ?答案 or you will regret it (2)我會尊重大部分學生的觀點,否則很難和他們處好關系。 ???
? ?答案 I will respect the opinion of most students, or it's difficult for me to get
along well with them. 4.表原因:常用的連詞是for。 ?典句引領 It must have rained last night, for the ground is wet. 昨晚肯定下雨了,因為地面是濕的。 ?雕詞琢句 他閱讀有困難,因為他的視力不好。 ???
? ?答案 He has trouble in reading, for his sight is poor. 5.表對比:常用的連詞是while。 ?典句引領 At school,some students are active while some are shy. 在學校,有些學生很積極,而有些學生很害羞。 ?雕詞琢句 (1)He is fond of math, ????(而我對英語感興趣). ?答案 while I show interest in/am interested in English (2)好的習慣能提高學習效率,而壞習慣效果卻恰恰相反。(2024江西) ?
??? ?答案 Good habits can lead to high learning efficiency, while bad ones lead to
the opposite.
二、學以致用 1.完美文章 結合括號中的提示,將并列句補充完整。 No doubt every Senior 3 student wishes to be successful in the university entrance examinations,(1) ????(但是我們應該做什么)in order to achieve success? Here are some suggestions. First,it's very important to have a right attitude,(2) ????(因為一種 正常的心態和自信心可以幫助我們放松)and enable us to overcome difficulties bravely.Meanwhile,we should have a definite goal (3) ????(并且我 們應該正確地自我評價).Only in this way will we not be easily pleased or disap- pointed with what we have known and done.Besides,we'd better sometimes talk with our parents,teachers and classmates,(4) ????(他們可能會幫助 我們擺脫困境)when we are in trouble.Finally,striking a proper balance between study and rest keeps us energetic (5) ???? (健康的飲食也有用). With these done,I think we can greatly improve our performance. ?答案 (1)but what should we do (2)for a normal state of mind and self-confidence can help us to relax (3)and we should estimate ourselves correctly (4)and they may help us out (5)and a healthy diet is useful as well 2.話題寫作 [本期話題] 語言學習 [寫作要求] 至少運用三種并列句。 根據下面的信息提示,就“如何學好英語”寫一篇80詞左右的英語短文。 1.每天聽讀英語; 2.經常朗讀英語和背誦短文; 3.堅持寫作訓練;
4.遇到困難時,不要放棄。 ? ?
? ?答案 One possible version: In order to have a good command of English, we can do various things. Firstly, we should make it a rule to listen to English materials and read English articles every day, for they are useful for developing language sense. Secondly, it is im- portant to read English aloud often and it's also good to recite short English arti- cles. Thirdly, stick to writing something regularly, or we can't improve our writ- ing ability soon. Finally, when we meet with difficulties, never give up.
三、美文賞讀 假設你是李華,最近你校要舉行以“My Favorite Teacher”為主題的英語 作文比賽。請根據下表的信息提示,用英語寫一篇短文介紹你的班主任李老 師的情況。 概況 1.年近50,1990年來校任教,工作一直很努力,曾多次受到表揚。 2.知識豐富,教學有方,他的課生動有趣,學生愛聽他的課。 3.與學生關系融洽,對學生要求嚴格,經常鼓勵學生為祖國勤奮學習。 4.在他的幫助下,大家進步很快。 ??
[我來試寫] ?答案 One possible version: My Favorite Teacher Of all my teachers,Mr.Li is the one who impresses me most.Though he is nearly fifty,he looks very young for his age. He came to our school in 1990 ①and all these years he has been working hard. Because of his excellent work,he has been praised many times,②but he remains modest.③Not only does he have much knowledge but also he tries to make his classes lively and interesting through various ways,④so all of us enjoy his class- es.He gets on well with us students,⑤but he is strict with us.What's more,he of- ten encourages us to study hard for the good of our country.With his help,we've made great progress. All in all,Mr.Li is not only our good teacher,but also our good friend.He is such a learned person that we all admire him very much. 在文中①—⑤處,作者充分運用了and,but,so,not only...but also...連接的并列 句。句子雖然簡短,但連貫性很強,很好地完成了寫作任務。 【寫作點評】
一、魔法導航 并列句是由并列連詞連接兩個分句而組成的句子,其基本結構是:簡單句+并列 連詞+簡單句。并列句中的前后兩個分句根據邏輯關系可分為以下幾種: 1.表并列或遞進:常用連詞是and;常用句型有not only...but also(不僅……而且 ……),not...but...(不是……而是……),be about to do...when...(正要做某事,就在 這時/那時……)。 ?典句引領 Work hard and you will succeed one day.
努力工作,早晚有一天你會成功的。 Tom was about to close the window when his attention was caught by a bird.
湯姆正要關上窗戶,就在那時一只鳥引起了他的注意。 ——齊頭并進,抑揚頓挫 ?雕詞琢句 If you are able to come with us, please let us know????(我們將會等你) at the school gate at 9 in the morning. (2024課標全國Ⅱ) ?答案 and we'll wait for you 2.表轉折:常用的連詞是but和yet。 ?典句引領 This math problem was very difficult, but I managed to solve it. 這道數學題很難,但是我設法把它解決了。 ?雕詞琢句 我想去博物館,但是絕大部分同學想去野餐。(2024浙江) ?
??? ?答案 I would love to go to a museum, but most of my classmates wanted to go
for a picnic. 3.表選擇:常用的連詞是or。 ?典句引領 Hurry up, or you'll be late for the meeting. 快點,否則你開會會遲到的。 ?雕詞琢句 (1)Seize the opportunity, ????(否則你會后悔的). ?答案 or you will regret it (2)我會尊重大部分學生的觀點,否則很難和他們處好關系。 ???
? ?答案 I will respect the opinion of most students, or it's difficult for me to get
along well with them. 4.表原因:常用的連詞是for。 ?典句引領 It must have rained last night, for the ground is wet. 昨晚肯定下雨了,因為地面是濕的。 ?雕詞琢句 他閱讀有困難,因為他的視力不好。 ???
? ?答案 He has trouble in reading, for his sight is poor. 5.表對比:常用的連詞是while。 ?典句引領 At school,some students are active while some are shy. 在學校,有些學生很積極,而有些學生很害羞。 ?雕詞琢句 (1)He is fond of math, ????(而我對英語感興趣). ?答案 while I show interest in/am interested in English (2)好的習慣能提高學習效率,而壞習慣效果卻恰恰相反。(2024江西) ?
??? ?答案 Good habits can lead to high learning efficiency, while bad ones lead to
the opposite.
二、學以致用 1.完美文章 結合括號中的提示,將并列句補充完整。 No doubt every Senior 3 student wishes to be successful in the university entrance examinations,(1) ????(但是我們應該做什么)in order to achieve success? Here are some suggestions. First,it's very important to have a right attitude,(2) ????(因為一種 正常的心態和自信心可以幫助我們放松)and enable us to overcome difficulties bravely.Meanwhile,we should have a definite goal (3) ????(并且我 們應該正確地自我評價).Only in this way will we not be easily pleased or disap- pointed with what we have known and done.Besides,we'd better sometimes talk with our parents,teachers and classmates,(4) ????(他們可能會幫助 我們擺脫困境)when we are in trouble.Finally,striking a proper balance between study and rest keeps us energetic (5) ???? (健康的飲食也有用). With these done,I think we can greatly improve our performance. ?答案 (1)but what should we do (2)for a normal state of mind and self-confidence can help us to relax (3)and we should estimate ourselves correctly (4)and they may help us out (5)and a healthy diet is useful as well 2.話題寫作 [本期話題] 語言學習 [寫作要求] 至少運用三種并列句。 根據下面的信息提示,就“如何學好英語”寫一篇80詞左右的英語短文。 1.每天聽讀英語; 2.經常朗讀英語和背誦短文; 3.堅持寫作訓練;
4.遇到困難時,不要放棄。 ? ?
? ?答案 One possible version: In order to have a good command of English, we can do various things. Firstly, we should make it a rule to listen to English materials and read English articles every day, for they are useful for developing language sense. Secondly, it is im- portant to read English aloud often and it's also good to recite short English arti- cles. Thirdly, stick to writing something regularly, or we can't improve our writ- ing ability soon. Finally, when we meet with difficulties, never give up.
三、美文賞讀 假設你是李華,最近你校要舉行以“My Favorite Teacher”為主題的英語 作文比賽。請根據下表的信息提示,用英語寫一篇短文介紹你的班主任李老 師的情況。 概況 1.年近50,1990年來校任教,工作一直很努力,曾多次受到表揚。 2.知識豐富,教學有方,他的課生動有趣,學生愛聽他的課。 3.與學生關系融洽,對學生要求嚴格,經常鼓勵學生為祖國勤奮學習。 4.在他的幫助下,大家進步很快。 ??
[我來試寫] ?答案 One possible version: My Favorite Teacher Of all my teachers,Mr.Li is the one who impresses me most.Though he is nearly fifty,he looks very young for his age. He came to our school in 1990 ①and all these years he has been working hard. Because of his excellent work,he has been praised many times,②but he remains modest.③Not only does he have much knowledge but also he tries to make his classes lively and interesting through various ways,④so all of us enjoy his class- es.He gets on well with us students,⑤but he is strict with us.What's more,he of- ten encourages us to study hard for the good of our country.With his help,we've made great progress. All in all,Mr.Li is not only our good teacher,but also our good friend.He is such a learned person that we all admire him very much. 在文中①—⑤處,作者充分運用了and,but,so,not only...but also...連接的并列 句。句子雖然簡短,但連貫性很強,很好地完成了寫作任務。 【寫作點評】
