2024屆高考英語寫作分類掌握復習課件：27 舉例說明（新人教版）

　　* * 主題：和諧的師生關系對你的影響(2011天河一模)

　　[提出觀點] Actually, having a good relationship with teachers makes it easier for us to get along smoothly with our study at school.

　　[舉例說明] Take me for example. [例子] My teacher is my good friend.

　　晨讀狂背語篇模板

　　When I fail in the exam, it is my teacher that first helps me to analyze the problem. She is patient enough to make me get over all the difficulties in my study. When I am unhappy, she always listens to me carefully and then gives me some reasonable suggestions, so that I can focus on my study soon. Also, I have learned to be helpful and considerate.

　　[重申主題] But for the good relationship with my teachers, I could not have made such progress.

　　舉例說明就是通過舉例子來證明某種觀點, 闡明某種道理。例子不必長篇大論, 但一定要與主題相吻合。寫例子之前可用一句話過渡, 寫完例子后用一兩句話重申主題。

　　靈活運用超級模仿 一、句式模板 (1) However, there are other ways to make students work hard. For example, teachers can reward us with small gifts if we do a good job.

　　(2) A good parent should possess some good qualities, especially when facing her children. Take my mother, a model parent, as an example.

　　(3) There is no denying that confidence plays an important role in our life. A convincing example that jumps into my mind is about speaking English. (4) From what is mentioned above, we can safely draw the conclusion that confidence really makes a difference. Therefore it’s wise for us to stay confident all the time.

　　(5) Such examples can be seen easily in our daily life. A good case in point is ...

　　這樣的例子在生活中很容易見到, 一個很好的例子就是…… 二、超級仿寫 1.舉例說明只要不放棄就能成功。

　　In fact, many famous persons in the world lived through a hard time and got their achievements. We can find lots of examples in our daily life. Thomas Edison, a great inventor, achieved his success after hundreds of failures.

　　Helen Keller, a girl who couldn’t hear or see anything, made her great efforts to overcome all the difficulties she met within her lifetime, and became a famous educator and writer. From these facts, we can learn that never giving up will bring you great success, which John and Washington taught us. 2.讀寫任務

　　閱讀下面的短文, 然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。

　　When a lion was asleep, a little mouse began running up and down beside him and made some noise. This soon wake the lion. Losing his temper, he caught the mouse in his paws and was about to kill it. The mouse, terrified, pleaded to the lion to spare its life.

　　“Please let me go,” it cried, “and one day I will repay you for your kindness.” The idea of so small a creature ever being able to do anything for him amused the lion so much that he laughed aloud. He thought, “How could this little mouse help me?” However, he lifted his paws and let it go.

　　But the mouse’s chance came after all. A few days later, when the lion was wandering in the forest, he was caught in a trap. The hunters wanted to take him alive to the king, so he tied him to a tree, and went away to look for a wagon.

　　Just then the little mouse passed by, and saw the sad lion. It went up to him and soon gnawed away(啃斷) the ropes. “Was I right?” asked the little mouse. This lion nodded his head and thanked the little mouse. [寫作要求] 1.以約30詞概括短文的內容要點； 2.以約120個詞就“勿以善小而不為”的主題發表看法, 至少包含以下內容要點：

　　(1)該故事給你什么啟示？ (2)你認為生活中的小善舉能帶來大作用嗎？ (3)請舉例說明。 [寫作要求] 作文中可以使用親身經歷或虛構的故事, 也可以參照閱讀材料的內容, 但不得直接引用原文中的句子。 [評分標準] 概括準確, 語言規范, 內容合適, 語篇連貫。

　　A mouse begged an lion, who was woken up by the mouse, to spare his life. Later, the mouse helped the lion by gnawing the ropes.

　　After reading this story, I came to realize that people should never ignore the deed of small kindness. Small good deeds sometimes may get big returns or make a great difference!

　　[要證明的觀點] I fully agree that trivial things play an important part in our life. [引出例子] Such examples can be seen easily in our daily life. A good case in point is, as we can see, a word of encouragement from a sincere teacher often changes a downhearted student’s idea and behavior.

　　Another example is that a warm smile to someone who loses courage and wants to commit suicide may comfort him, cheer him up and help him through the darkest night in his life.

　　[重申主題]In a word, it is the trivial things in daily life that count. Just as the famous saying goes, do not think any virtue trivial, and so neglect it; do not think any vice trivial, and so practice it.

　　* * 主題：和諧的師生關系對你的影響(2011天河一模)

　　[提出觀點] Actually, having a good relationship with teachers makes it easier for us to get along smoothly with our study at school.

　　[舉例說明] Take me for example. [例子] My teacher is my good friend.

　　晨讀狂背語篇模板

　　When I fail in the exam, it is my teacher that first helps me to analyze the problem. She is patient enough to make me get over all the difficulties in my study. When I am unhappy, she always listens to me carefully and then gives me some reasonable suggestions, so that I can focus on my study soon. Also, I have learned to be helpful and considerate.

　　[重申主題] But for the good relationship with my teachers, I could not have made such progress.

　　舉例說明就是通過舉例子來證明某種觀點, 闡明某種道理。例子不必長篇大論, 但一定要與主題相吻合。寫例子之前可用一句話過渡, 寫完例子后用一兩句話重申主題。

　　靈活運用超級模仿 一、句式模板 (1) However, there are other ways to make students work hard. For example, teachers can reward us with small gifts if we do a good job.

　　(2) A good parent should possess some good qualities, especially when facing her children. Take my mother, a model parent, as an example.

　　(3) There is no denying that confidence plays an important role in our life. A convincing example that jumps into my mind is about speaking English. (4) From what is mentioned above, we can safely draw the conclusion that confidence really makes a difference. Therefore it’s wise for us to stay confident all the time.

　　(5) Such examples can be seen easily in our daily life. A good case in point is ...

　　這樣的例子在生活中很容易見到, 一個很好的例子就是…… 二、超級仿寫 1.舉例說明只要不放棄就能成功。

　　In fact, many famous persons in the world lived through a hard time and got their achievements. We can find lots of examples in our daily life. Thomas Edison, a great inventor, achieved his success after hundreds of failures.

　　Helen Keller, a girl who couldn’t hear or see anything, made her great efforts to overcome all the difficulties she met within her lifetime, and became a famous educator and writer. From these facts, we can learn that never giving up will bring you great success, which John and Washington taught us. 2.讀寫任務

　　閱讀下面的短文, 然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。

　　When a lion was asleep, a little mouse began running up and down beside him and made some noise. This soon wake the lion. Losing his temper, he caught the mouse in his paws and was about to kill it. The mouse, terrified, pleaded to the lion to spare its life.

　　“Please let me go,” it cried, “and one day I will repay you for your kindness.” The idea of so small a creature ever being able to do anything for him amused the lion so much that he laughed aloud. He thought, “How could this little mouse help me?” However, he lifted his paws and let it go.

　　But the mouse’s chance came after all. A few days later, when the lion was wandering in the forest, he was caught in a trap. The hunters wanted to take him alive to the king, so he tied him to a tree, and went away to look for a wagon.

　　Just then the little mouse passed by, and saw the sad lion. It went up to him and soon gnawed away(啃斷) the ropes. “Was I right?” asked the little mouse. This lion nodded his head and thanked the little mouse. [寫作要求] 1.以約30詞概括短文的內容要點； 2.以約120個詞就“勿以善小而不為”的主題發表看法, 至少包含以下內容要點：

　　(1)該故事給你什么啟示？ (2)你認為生活中的小善舉能帶來大作用嗎？ (3)請舉例說明。 [寫作要求] 作文中可以使用親身經歷或虛構的故事, 也可以參照閱讀材料的內容, 但不得直接引用原文中的句子。 [評分標準] 概括準確, 語言規范, 內容合適, 語篇連貫。

　　A mouse begged an lion, who was woken up by the mouse, to spare his life. Later, the mouse helped the lion by gnawing the ropes.

　　After reading this story, I came to realize that people should never ignore the deed of small kindness. Small good deeds sometimes may get big returns or make a great difference!

　　[要證明的觀點] I fully agree that trivial things play an important part in our life. [引出例子] Such examples can be seen easily in our daily life. A good case in point is, as we can see, a word of encouragement from a sincere teacher often changes a downhearted student’s idea and behavior.

　　Another example is that a warm smile to someone who loses courage and wants to commit suicide may comfort him, cheer him up and help him through the darkest night in his life.

　　[重申主題]In a word, it is the trivial things in daily life that count. Just as the famous saying goes, do not think any virtue trivial, and so neglect it; do not think any vice trivial, and so practice it.