雅思寫作復議成功經驗分享

　　下面雅思為大家整理了雅思寫作復議成功經驗分享，供考生們參考，以下是詳細內容。

　　學生第一次來郵:

　　我的寫作成績值得復議嗎?

　　老師,

　　您好. 我是您108期周末班的龔雪媚. 在您批改的作文中大多得6+, 您對我的評語就是英語表達超6,組織得好就能拿7的那位同學.

　　我在9月23日參加的考試,寫作居然只有5分.那次的大作文寫的是越來越多的人開私家車,說說優點和缺點.我是這樣寫的:

　　優點:私家車能繁榮經濟, 特別是汽車工業.

　　方便, 能隨時隨地到任何地方,不用象公交車一樣限定線路和時間.

　　舒適, 不用擠公交車.

　　缺點:令道路更堵塞,特別是上下班高峰期.

　　汽油供應短缺,很多私家車需要排隊加油

　　造成更多的環境污染.

　　結尾: 認為開私家車的缺點大于優點.

　　考完出來自我感覺良好, 不知是否我這樣寫離題了才得個5分, 還請賴老師指點.

　　我這樣寫可以拿6分嗎? 我想申請成績復議, 值得這樣做嗎?

　　老師回復:

　　yes,i think ud better go for an application of reevaluating. anyway, ill still need to tell u some mistakes u made.

　　now let me try to simulate how the examiner was looking at your task2 n then drew such a stupid conclusion.

　　the first idea is not based on comparison and contrast----more private cars help boom the car manufacturing industry not a right idea. but the second one hits the point---convenience. how about the drawbacks? traffic jams caused---hmmmm..good idea. more pollution is created---good too. but queue to fill up tanks with gasoline----hmmmm...u might not express it in a coherent way.

　　after all, u included one good point for the positive side n one for the negative side. i believe u definitely deserve a chance to get band 6. the examiner probably only read the first bit of the advantages n then turned to briefly examine the last part and hence marked your paper like this. if u apply for reassessing, the entire paper will be scrutinized by another examiner, n the good points will not be missed. this is why i tend to encourage u to have a try.

　　if unclear, call me .

　　good luck!

　　Andrew

　　學生最后來郵

　　Im glad to tell you that my writing is re-marked as band 6. Thank you very much for the encouragement, otherwise I may lose the confidence to apply the remark.

　　下面雅思為大家整理了雅思寫作復議成功經驗分享，供考生們參考，以下是詳細內容。

　　學生第一次來郵:

　　我的寫作成績值得復議嗎?

　　老師,

　　您好. 我是您108期周末班的龔雪媚. 在您批改的作文中大多得6+, 您對我的評語就是英語表達超6,組織得好就能拿7的那位同學.

　　我在9月23日參加的考試,寫作居然只有5分.那次的大作文寫的是越來越多的人開私家車,說說優點和缺點.我是這樣寫的:

　　優點:私家車能繁榮經濟, 特別是汽車工業.

　　方便, 能隨時隨地到任何地方,不用象公交車一樣限定線路和時間.

　　舒適, 不用擠公交車.

　　缺點:令道路更堵塞,特別是上下班高峰期.

　　汽油供應短缺,很多私家車需要排隊加油

　　造成更多的環境污染.

　　結尾: 認為開私家車的缺點大于優點.

　　考完出來自我感覺良好, 不知是否我這樣寫離題了才得個5分, 還請賴老師指點.

　　我這樣寫可以拿6分嗎? 我想申請成績復議, 值得這樣做嗎?

　　老師回復:

　　yes,i think ud better go for an application of reevaluating. anyway, ill still need to tell u some mistakes u made.

　　now let me try to simulate how the examiner was looking at your task2 n then drew such a stupid conclusion.

　　the first idea is not based on comparison and contrast----more private cars help boom the car manufacturing industry not a right idea. but the second one hits the point---convenience. how about the drawbacks? traffic jams caused---hmmmm..good idea. more pollution is created---good too. but queue to fill up tanks with gasoline----hmmmm...u might not express it in a coherent way.

　　after all, u included one good point for the positive side n one for the negative side. i believe u definitely deserve a chance to get band 6. the examiner probably only read the first bit of the advantages n then turned to briefly examine the last part and hence marked your paper like this. if u apply for reassessing, the entire paper will be scrutinized by another examiner, n the good points will not be missed. this is why i tend to encourage u to have a try.

　　if unclear, call me .

　　good luck!

　　Andrew

　　學生最后來郵

　　Im glad to tell you that my writing is re-marked as band 6. Thank you very much for the encouragement, otherwise I may lose the confidence to apply the remark.